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~Symbolikull~
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im back like time travel....

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stuntins a habit? i shoot so quit frontin n grab it,
actin like yall hard, please u nothin but average,//
a vigilanti, criminals wit no source of direction,
i rob pockets like church! i force the collection,//
of multis n metas, cuz yall cant compare 2 my similes,
it the ghost n yall like demi u scared 2 b feelin me,//
leavin these pussies loose the way i walk thru walls,
put 6in holes in ur chest when this mossberg coughs,//
16 syllables true every words mastered so burn a classic,
gsb the one who, stuns u, talk da shit but cant learn 2 back it,//
u cant stand up im the type to let my feet do the talkin,
ill murk u for da low low as the price drops cheap as a coffin,//
i wont kill u but ur barely alive gettin buried alived,
carry the 9, i give life n breath, which i rarely provide,//
think ur steel prevents it, bitch ima steal ur necklace,
so real n restless, im all the one whos fills the census,//
this perception, of addiction 2 writtens is my intervention,
i risk disception, for the t.i.p. dont let it b a missconception,//
i may jus lift the weapon, so stress it, i spit a smith n wesson,
in 6 directions, wit deflection, aim right i even hit reflections,//
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by - Mutual - »

this shit was fire
the flow was pretty decent
and mixed with the script
the multies were pretty well
way to be reppin
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Arvincible »

yes ghost is back

dope piece...nice comeback
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Post by MagicMark »

yeah this not bad... multis decent.. flow was very nice.. some nice lines, some okay lines..

decent piece...
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx for the feed
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Lawgix »

this is fire... i liked every bit of it... well written... Verbal Intel Murder At Will!!!! BIOTCH!!!
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Post by Omega Bill »

Glad to see you back man.

Nice drop for your return. Multies were on point like usual, but it didn't seem like the Ghost of old to me.

Can't wait to see what you put out once you start writing all the time again.
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Post by Cee4 »

i thought you retired lol

anyway good to see you back.
i thought this was pretty dope. your last drop before you left was always gonna be a hard one to follow. this wasnt on the same scale but still better than the majority on here. this verse was on some hard but intelligent shit

a vigilanti, criminals wit no source of direction,
i rob pockets like church! i force the collection,//
of multis n metas, cuz yall cant compare 2 my similes,
it the ghost n yall like demi u scared 2 b feelin me,//
^^^^
loved these bars here


the whole verse was dope in my book
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