'C.Manson' (Crazy)

[Def-init]

I go 'C.Manson',
Every time I envision kids 'Home Alone' with parents slammin the heroin,
Every time there stoned in the morning trying to pick out the kids fashion
A normal reaction is to go 'C.Manson' when parents are so blatantly void of compassion
I demand action when a seed goes to school without rations
The crystallized tears start as the dawn of their fears rise
Realize there just a lost soul in a place where coke seems decriminalized
Knowing these parents are pieces of shit, cock sucking pagans
Makes this topic epic like God's battle with Satan
Repenting is past there reach like the Book of Common Prayer
Being so gassed prevents a repenting parent, cause they deprived of air

I go 'C.Manson'
When a child understands what their parents are doing
Fooling themselves with all the thoughts there feeling
Feel me! These parents even fail at choosing the realest tasting coffee
This powerful imagery vividly screams sympathy
I'm here diligently, ill and beastly. Perpetually able to spit flows permanently
Haters reflect on this fact bitterly and silence your screams
Like a soccer Ref actually being chased and caught by both teams
The change of the chest to fragments of red lead
Proves blood spills more than tears shed.
Let's end this verse with Visuals of the sunrise
Cause when these parents lifeline dies, the realm of Hell lies.

I go 'C.Manson'
Wondering why the clergy has so many abuse scandals
Picture 7 wise men holding candles
Picture the infant Jesus and his manger
See, even the bible has kids in the presence of strangers
Nasty shit!! But I am not participating!!
I hear guns blazing, not from our streets or the nearest block
They come from across the seas.
Where no one is free to freely spit frees
Where propaganda is rampant without end like 50 Cents albums.
Thoughts about evil turbans coming to get me yall can't even fathom.

I go 'C.Manson'
Cause life is cruel when people use war and death to fuel...
The mind, Set for horror starting in public school
Taught the wrong things like go for the crown jewels
Forget the golden rule. What we do comes full circle
We act sinful and get high on a social sniffle
Gotta act tactful. Bust lead tearing tissue like tinsel
Shredding mental temples. Visuals that teach generations like pupils
Now that's just street. If it was war you would get a medal
It's not so you just end up muzzled in jail
Bleeding more than a bitch on her menstrual
I spit cosmic arsenic without ethical care
These words cause panic and cause minds to boggle
You can't believe it. Now you're frantic and the need for a medic is real

I go 'C.Manson'
Sitting here strumming a beat, thinking how to fix the plumbing
Life is on the move but the setbacks keep coming
The heart is drumming, everything about me is numbing,
Can't even feel the dick when Cumming
Now I'm upset watching news on the TV set.
With no regret, China started invading the Capital of Tibet
Plain wrong, more sour than the most potent vinaigrette
Songs beat just like a religious dong, I seem anything but calm
My ex saw to that at full speed, didn't want a child to breastfeed
My seed's existence never achieved the full distance
She took the path of passive resistance and superseded my wishes
I wish there was a stampede so I could grab this rope and proceed
Styles of execution are my thoughts, my soul is never freed
I awake at night; the bed soaked from sweat like it was peed
From dreams of sitting down with a daughter and a tea set.
Or thoughts of battling my son with chess set,
On a family trip catching carp with a fish net
These are the chains that bind and torture me.
Murdering bitch, I dare you to step up front and try me...
Give you fruit from a poisonous tree.
Can't change thoughts of you to a tolerable degree
Our relationship was like the battle of the Coral Sea.
Cause I lost more than the south's General E.Lee
It wasn't fair that she choose the destiny of three
and removed the heart from deep inside of me


I go 'C.Manson'
When lessons aren't learned from affection
The road to hell was paved with good intentions
Cast away the shackles of modern oppression
Like prisoners after the war of the Spanish succession
Shred all material possession, change that indirect expression
Absolute truth is a dangerous commodity causing clinical depression
I look upon the world with unfocused eyes
Unfocused thoughts for my rallying cry
Each chime of the pendulum swing is just time pulling my strings
Spit powerful ideas with Verbal stings. I'm a Killer bee
Consider me a political detainee. I've seen friends turn to foes.
No polyphonic prose can describe it. I'm a dying breed like the confederate rose.
This world is fuckin' primal, man. Western lands only in partial cause we have sin
But the worlds left coast is the right coast to live in.



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[Ambiguous Realm]

wow this was longer then i thought, i only read halfway so far, its pretty decent, on a negative note it was a little mediocre here n there, the rhyme scheme was pretty basic but there were uses of a larger vocabulary to cover up some spots, so overall wat i read i'd give a 3/5

keep droppin

[Arvincible]

God damn...this shit was crazy long. U put a lot of work into this. Great job! There were some parts that were really off like "bed was wet like it was peed"
I didn't feel that, but there were nice sections like the "ex havin ya seed" bar. Really impressive on the alliterations...I picked it up quick in the flow. A lot of fillers but all in all its a solid 8/10.

Tip: u need to work on multis so if u want it to flow more fluidly...but like I said ur more poetic than anything, so ur concepts still pass for ur style.