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There's truth to this

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

im just rhymin-to-rhyme-again rewinding-the-time-to-spin, visionin-the-past, where i was still wishin-it-would-last, now the future we hold is us listenin-to-trash, whether or not these rhymes-r-sensible, in a true battle my minds-invincible, i'm-convinced-to-show but not persuaded-enough ..been rated-above n now i'm too hated-to-love,u couldn't comprehend me if i elaborated-a-bunch, complex creativity made-with-a-punch, A-VOID-IN CONTACT like ya'll too FAKE n im too famous-to-TOUCH, was never askin-for-much, simply just respect but now my passion-is-done, i put out MAGAZINES of WEAPONS just so i can FASHION-a-GUN, think i'm weak cuz my lyrics r effortless? shit i'm just havin-some-fun

yea another freestyle lol
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Post by Arvincible »

for a fuckin "oh shit imma write a two minute verse" this was hot...

diction was higher and creativity is yet again impressive...go read a book or play a sport or something man, lol u just scribblin a lot now haha jk man great job.
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Post by Kurse »

Now that was dope haha

That was classic Ekoms there.

That "i put out MAGAZINES of WEAPONS just so i can FASHION-a-GUN" was just sick!!!
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

haha, thanks for the feed guys
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Post by Haz »

This Was Coo..
Multi's Wus There..
Nothin Really Caught My Eye...
Deff Flowed Well...

Mag Line Wus Straight..

KEep Droppin
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Post by precise »

lol not bad at all dude, a classic ekoms key-up really
couple decent punches n sick multies
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

This Shit Was Koo ..
Nothin Real Special Bout it ..
Coulda Been Better to Be Real ..
Flow Was On Point Tho ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Jesodist »

Nice shit big homie.
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Post by TreTru »

sounded on point.I got the rythm. good transfers.
heavy on the multis..
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Post by - Mutual - »

yeah was dope with Multies
pretty straight fire verse here
the punch Kurse said was dope man
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Jesodist »

Thats real truth right here i read it again and i really felt that shit.
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Post by Glamtrash »

Well, for something that was written in the span of two minutes, it's not bad at all kid. The line that Kurse quoted was my favourite overall as well. Good shit.
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Post by TreTru »

Ekoms hit me up when you get back next year...
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Post by Jesodist »

Nothing like the truth.
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Post by TheCh3mist »

yeah not bad for a quick lil spit homie, flow was good n shit, no hard punches really or anything but fuck it, its all hip hop baby! ahah
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