Sinking Dreams

[AnonymousMan]

I sink dream ships as if I were posiden
Send these bitches to a worse place than prison, an asylum
now how you gonna get words up n' pile em
like as much shit as I get, you couldn't vile me
I'm far beyond any level you see
I'm dead, death, give you the sickness
you shouldn't be allowed to participate like Jehova Whitnesses
go back to being a wannabe thug in your school
walking around with your rags on, wow you're cool
you just a fool, wannabe Minority, bitch I'm the minority
white as fuck and was once the majority
still am cause My Mind controls over you real or Metaphorically
What? I sunk your battle ship?
and I didn't even begin to flip
you musta slipped, yeah tripped
off the edge of your seat, thinking you got heat
carrying a microwave with you when you trick n' treat
trying to get some problems started
I corrupt things when I'm being half hearted
so what makes you think you could of even brought it?
you got it? man you got shit
I upthrown bigger bitches like the hit of switches
Bring the Crosses and Raise up the Lynches
its a kodak moment so take your pictures
before this Storm gets calmed like Fan Fixtures
pull a string, man what a easy lil thing
please ask Cee to help you with something to BRING
I'll make her the truth for all to view
I know what I know, cause all the scenes I drew
you, him, hell bring a damn crew
I'll slap you all and then knock you to the floor
More Cynical than the Raven, you are NeverMore
you and your pathetic invision or rapture
All your concepts I have already Captured
Far gone, I'm a Far Scape you can't Preceive
its like Pluto being part of a Ice Ring and theres more to recieve
we got more planets revolving, can you believe?
I can, cause I am the Reaper, Grimm
A Reincarnate of what some just call HIM
so sickened I'm within every Aids Victim
causing every illness every symptom
can't touch me or you fall gasping
relapsing, man Fake Gangsters get a wiff of me and start Collapsing
get back boy, before you meet a real Man
Shouldn't of come at me, cause I'm Unleashed
you're just weak, a punk ass Diaper Dan
Looney? ha more like Tiny Tunes...man I'm finished
your status that you could ever gain is now relenquished
whatever state of mind is now Deminished
a birth mark now left so your forever blimished
surgery can't even cure what happened with the Ugly Stick
you and me, The Boy and The Owl, Tootsie Pop Licks
I know how to Flick, get through while you throw a Fit
me the White Sox, you the Mets trying to find the right Mit
cause just like them you can't catch a simple sentence
Tunes Done Exited The Building before he could even make his Enterance...

[lunathecursedangel]

Send these bitches to a worse place than prison, an asylum
now how you gonna get words up n' pile em

can't touch me or you fall gasping
relapsing, man Fake Gangsters get a wiff of me and start Collapsing



Overall this was a solid piece. A few fillers though.

Your freestyles are always long, and you don't diss anyone specific much. So people kinda know what to expect from you. You need to be more unpredictable. Try writing a story, for something innovative. That would be interesting to see from you.

[Anonymous]

Yeh I know, I try to hone my shit though through free...I dunno, its tougher at times cause my mind is so skippy like a warped LP...

Why I'll say it now as I did before...I am the White ODB...

but to quote a different group... - I make Jack The Ripper look like your Guardian Angel.

[complexity]

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