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Cazmatrolium
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Quick Li'l Freestyle (First one in a while)

Post by Cazmatrolium »

Im back again im still hardcore, violent mofo for sure
Breakin heads in ya car door, I keep strapped with da burner
Ya girl on her knees she a quick learner, I like da pussy mooshy
Wet and gushy like ya head on da pavement if you push me
I'll stab toothpicks in ya dick, have blood pissin out ya prick
Im sick but at da same time slick, ask ya bitch who shaved her shit
You can find me with 2 li'l boys playin Jenga with Arsene Wenger
While gettin my asshole licked by that R&B singer
Her name i cant remember, she had a hit record last December
But like Wycleff im gone till November, vacation for da next 11 months
Find me layin on a beach in a thong and a pair of Reebok pumps
Catchin a sun tan with Katy Perry and hittin on fat chicks
She likes da taste of cherry chapstick all over my chapped dick
You can catch me with my ass in public like Shyla Stylez
Runnin da streets naked needin a shit coz i got da piles
Call me Farmer Giles, for medication i take Butcher's Broom
I blame my mum when i was young she beat me with da wooden spoon
Then Dad went away and she showed me what i should and shouldnt do!
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Post by TreTru »

sorry..It was a good try, allright for a freestyle piece,
but overall not too good..not trying to be a hater, I'm pretty sure you'll get harsher criticism.than this so just keep practicin and keep postin..

peace..
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