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any thoughts to anything about it
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wat's the concept for this? that u can be anything u wanna be? from a gangster rapper that ends up dead or shot, to the president of the united states..ending up dead or shot.. or shot at lol

i hate solid backgrounds, i like seeing some scenery, or even like.. some form of texture just as long as its not solid

dont got too many ideas for this one at the moment just kinda woke up
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wot time is it fo u
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hm, im in the east coast of the united states, right now it's 2:37

but tomorrow i'll be an hour behind since i wont be in florida
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i'm 7 hours ahead of u like
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Its funny that Obama looks the most evil.
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haha, also add a lil unnoticable smoke rising from biggie's cigar
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We'll i Like This Pic, Probably Just Knowing That u Made it Out Of Photoshop, But This is Tight. The Quality Looks Good, Dont Get Why Some Of The People Are in it, But it's a Good One. Not The Best i Seen From u. You Should Change The Background To a Lighter Color, Or Add Background To it, To Make it More Catchy. i Know u Know That Though, But Yeah This is Better Then What i Can Do ..But Keep Up The Pics, i Like Seeing Them.
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it appears that your just taking a couple different images created by other people and combining them on a blank background. thats not really design. Its more than OK to use stock photography, and different graphic elements, etc. But you have to add some creativity, or something. Add text, or something that is your own. Add a background, play with some brushes and different photoshop effects, etc. There is literally thousands and thousands of different effects and things you can do in photoshop (and other graphic programs) so the possibilities are damn near endless.

So yeah, in short, experiment more. Use more of YOUR stuff. Do not just combined images from others on a background. Start reading photoshop tutorials, following design sites, etc.
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nah i had to cut out the 50 Pac n Biggie and proof but the Obama i got from one of my friends i wanted to put thw hitehouse in the background but bein that this is a cartoon picture i could get a good enoguh picture of the whitehouse i'm workin on doin one
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nah just in there cus i thought why not
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I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
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- Mutual Hostility - wrote:nah i had to cut out the 50 Pac n Biggie and proof but the Obama i got from one of my friends i wanted to put thw hitehouse in the background but bein that this is a cartoon picture i could get a good enoguh picture of the whitehouse i'm workin on doin one
I understand that. But, your still just pasting a couple of images on a black background. Thats not really design. As I said before, try adding text, backgrounds, effects to the pictures, something. The point is, you have to start playing with other things. Effects, brushes, text, something. Everyone starts where you are, so I'm not faulting you, just saying.


Instead of looking for a cartoonish picture of the whitehouse to use, you should draw one yourself. Then scan it in and use that. Then it would be more your own, and not just a combination of other peoples work.
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okay so check out my new shit then that is mine fo one of miilz's associates or friends or some shit
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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post it, or lemme know who has it, and ill check it out.
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