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First Drop Here... 4 bars..

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read the rules for battling on here n said u had to drop somethin in these forums, so i just keyed up 4 bars super quick..




Ayo!..

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Post by Brah-Vo »

Sup new comer,

For a quickie it was dope. You gotta nice simple flow, u gotta grasp of multis and u had good punches. Though it seems some multis didnt match up syllables at times but thats iight.
Keep up.
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Post by TreTru »

I read it..it's pretty good..lots of multis, story line was consistent
throughout so dope for a keystyle..


soooo.. all u HOES WIT TIGHT.. FLOWIN WRITES.. get 'STONED WIT PIPES'.. like your BLOWN N HIGH.. but NOTICE, I.. 'got the illestlyrics' so ofcourse ima “OWN THIS SITEâ€
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

This Shit Was Pretty Dope ..
i Liked That Broken Rod Shit That Was New ..
Least Favorite Was Tha End, it Wasn`t Up to Par Wit Tha Rest Of Tha Bars ..
But Nice Tho For a Quick Key,
Can`t Wait to See U Battle ..
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.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by TheCh3mist »

preciate the feedback fellaz, n i did this shit mad quick ahah, this aint nothin to what i usually spit, just put up somethin just to be able to battle ahah, but good looks, if any of ya'll need feed returned, hit up my inbox, 1..
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Post by ScottJames »

^stop frontin, u know u stayed in on Friday night to write these bars..

LoL

verse was dope though.
consistent
thorough.
nice.








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^lol, hell naw bro ahahah, i got fucked up on friday, im not hungover though, cuz i woke up n started drinkin again ahahah, good looks though brotherin..
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