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a drug's life

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i like drugs, i love to get high,
and look out the windows
but i hate to come down
so i jus make the bitches get low,
i got them bitches on a roll,
makin her time slow, whenever i go,
to drop bombs like i am a missile silo,
im a well rounded person, but drugs are what i know,
get the dice n blow cuz im a high roller,
or am i rollin stoned,
when i roll the dro?
people tell me "stay clean"
i say no to soap,
but i wont say no to dope,
like the wind, i might even try some blow,
my hearts cold, thas why i kinda like the snow.
like why not? who would know?
fuck the overdose,
my endorphins are on overflow
fuck my funeroll, who would show?
id rather that noone knows...
jus pull the plug if i go comatose...
becuz id revive and come back as the holy ghost.
but while im still alive, i keep an open mind,
there aint a drug that i wont try,
there aint a high that i wont find,
and even when i got no mind, im alright..
but shit this addiction's like a paracite.
even if i lost my spine n im paralyzed,
ill be fine... jus gimme a drug and im in paradise.

pulled this outta my ass pretty much... tired and burnt

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Wasnt bad, wasnt good. If it was pulled out in a 10 minute half ass written then understoof. It was decent know what im sayin?
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Post by Lotus »

good looks man.

most of my more talented works are written on paper. dunno exactly why, i find that when i write without a beat and im not distracted by the ease of keystylin, the quality comes out alot better
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Post by Brah-Vo »

We got alot in common homie, haha.
I find my stuff is more well thought out without a beat
Other times its better if i DO write with a beat.
Occasionally, my paper stuff comes out great
But other times the ish i type on the computer is doper .
But yeah my dude. Keep up.
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Post by Lotus »

depends on how well people flow.

if someones gotta good flow, or a background writin songs and poetry, it comes alot easier without a beat.. but it sucks when u try spittin it to a beat, you gotta be rele selective about which beat to do it to, cuz the emotion of the flow when you wrote it has to match

ima check out your superstar thing too i meant to do that earlier today
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