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eMCee Havic
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yall think your ill, lets see you cop a freestyle
my accapella chops a jailer you can look up my police files
at least i'll spit off the top wit segment drops
yall raps will drop flop when spitting them in front of flocks
its wack unreal thinking you getting mass appeal
when your raps will feel cold like the backs of eels
most of you capture meals off other peoples success
it doesnt make you suck less in the eyes of the public
your dumb mess of vocab misused it make your flow bad
you should know that need to get on the streets and go rap
thinking its bitches n mo cash
off the top i'm impecable my battle raps will sever fools
you seceptable to getting smashed up even verterans do
fuck a web site we take it too the streets
watch yall faggots take out paper and start to read
i dont need time to make my pencil bleed i do it with ease
fuck this place yall rappers suffering a mental disease
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Post by - Mutual - »

well not bad
alright for a keystyle sorta thing
but wasnt anything wowing an wot not
but a good read tho
keep'em comin

pls return the favour my new script "Vocab"
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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