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EvilJoey
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i just sat down and i got a terrible headache... No idea what im a rhyme about yet.. just hope it distracts me..




Horrible pain.. Stabbin and Throbbin...
Maybe these 2 aspirin can save me.. i named em Batman and Robin
the Pounding as bad as the Heart of a Fat man when Joggin
Hand me a Razor and ill be here all day Slayin ROOKS..
Make ur Heart Skip Like a Tattoo Artist Saying OOPS

Id be locked up for Murder.. but there lackin the Evidence...
No Remorse for Death my hearts as Black as the president
Dose jesus Love us? what about IraQ and its residents?
Passion of Christ? yeah if the passion is negligence

Fuckin head...

The Main Reaction to Pains.. Distraction...
my brains an Insane Contraption... Veins Collapsin
Anxiety attacks when ur the Main attraction
So We Take it back To basics... before the Fakes with Plastic Face lifts
High tops with black laces... Cassette tapes and Slap Bracelets

I continue to Smoke pot even if its Damagin my Health...
Get Really Fucked up and Take ... Advantage of my self

i get it mixed when i spit.. Some cats thank and Love me...
others wish to shank and jump me...
Love hate relationship like when i spank my monkey
for X-mas ill steal ur bitch…… and gank ur Puppy
Go ahead read my verse….. Rank and Judge me..
The Ancient Druggy.. Alcohol makes more than just my blankets Fuzzy
I shouldn't have drank the bubbly.. Toasting at the last Supper
Telling everyone this banquets Lovely

Fuck !... it didnt help...




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Post by ScottJames »

yeah this flowed dope, some nice puns/metas in there

my fav part:

Horrible pain.. Stabbin and Throbbin...
Maybe these 2 aspirin can save me.. i named em Batman and Robin
the Pounding as bad as the Heart of a Fat man when Joggin
Hand me a Razor and ill be here all day Slayin ROOKS..
Make ur Heart Skip Like a Tattoo Artist Saying OOPS

Id be locked up for Murder.. but there lackin the Evidence...
No Remorse for Death my hearts as Black as the president
Dose jesus Love us? what about IraQ and its residents?
Passion of Christ? yeah if the passion is negligence

Fuckin head...

The Main Reaction to Pains.. Distraction...
my brains an Insane Contraption... Veins Collapsin
Anxiety attacks when ur the Main attraction
So We Take it back To basics... before the Fakes with Plastic Face lifts
High tops with black laces... Cassette tapes and Slap Bracelets

I continue to Smoke pot even if its Damagin my Health...
Get Really Fucked up and Take ... Advantage of my self


overall...good shit dude
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Post by The Gonz »

Great multies and rhyme schemes. Post lacks direction, but I don't think it needs it. Randomness is definitely part of your style.

Id be locked up for Murder.. but there lackin the Evidence...
No Remorse for Death my hearts as Black as the president
Dose jesus Love us? what about IraQ and its residents?
Passion of Christ? yeah if the passion is negligence

^^Favorite part

Overall, pretty dope drop, but I've seen much sicker from you. I know we're still shaking off the cobwebs, man, but we haven't lost our touch lol.
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I continue to Smoke pot even if its Damagin my Health...
Get Really Fucked up and Take ... Advantage of my self

WoW ... Just WoW
Everyone has a plan until there being punched in the Face
: Mike Tyson
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Post by TreTru »

HAHA I didnt see this one ...sik dogg
killa rhyme scheme too ...



The Main Reaction to Pains.. Distraction...
my brains an Insane Contraption... Veins Collapsin
Anxiety attacks when ur the Main attraction
So We Take it back To basics... before the Fakes with Plastic Face lifts
High tops with black laces... Cassette tapes and Slap Bracelets


^^^^^that shit was my favorite part.sick schemin.. good shyt^^^^^^^^^
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