Lawgix - Young Thing

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Wed Jan 07, 2009 9:09 am

well this was a song i wrote for a girl i knew here in Missouri... she moved to God knows where... but i wrote it cause this is basically where she was leadin her life too... kinda give her a wake up call...

ÐÛÇ£» · Post by **ÐÛÇ£»** » Sat Jan 10, 2009 6:22 am

Bump..
I'll give feed when i get home
heres a lil feed for now

Beat Was Nice..Smooth...Hella Good

Ya Flow Was Good, Lyrics Were Real Nice.
Lmao @ She tolem to molester and got "A I D's"
Lmao sorry i found that funny overall great song..

I'll leave more elaborate feed when i get home

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Sun Jan 11, 2009 11:05 am

lol thanx for the feed man... i appreciate it... uppin for some more feed

Viral · Post by **Viral** » Tue Jan 13, 2009 5:09 am

way to step ur game up..every track u get better man..keep it up..i like dis track...deep story...true at that...ur flow was good...ur vocals were the only thing i had a problem with..sounded like dey got louder/lower at certain points..and the mixin coulda been better..but over all shit was nice man...dope beat too..i like that hook..keep doin u man

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Tue Jan 13, 2009 1:19 pm

thanx man i appreciate the feed homie... still uppin for some feed...

TreTru · Post by **TreTru** » Tue Jan 13, 2009 2:06 pm

hell yeah...shit was smooth son..did you do that beat?..that sample is nice too..lyrics had good meanin, deep type shiyt i like it dawg..IMO ya flo is a little different kinda punchy on ya transfers on vowels..fresh shyt dawg..
dope drop..peace..

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Tue Jan 13, 2009 2:49 pm

thanx man nah i found that shit on soundclick... i'm still workin with the audio thing... finna to get a pro mic soon as i get the cash for it... but yeah i'ma be doin some more shit but all i want is that pro mic i hate this shitty mic i got rite now lol.. but thanx for the feed dude... maybe we can collab or some shit...

ÐÛÇ£» · Post by **ÐÛÇ£»** » Wed Jan 14, 2009 6:44 am

Lmao..question?
Why did she asked to be molested

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Wed Jan 14, 2009 9:45 am

umm why does it matter??? its a song... this was a portrait of what i saw... giving her a wake up call of what she was doing to herself

HKX · Post by **HKX** » Thu Jan 15, 2009 10:18 am

I'm feelin dis track u deffo come up on ur shit dawg, da whole plot was dope only problem like viral said was ur vocals and u slipped on a few parts I caught them one stood out on da 2nd verse think u kno wat i'm talkin bout but either way dis track was dope ur uppin ur shit keep droppin dawg da more u drop da better you'll get emotion was pretty dope and she was molested cuz da nigga was older than her lol dat nigga knew wat he was doin lol

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Thu Jan 15, 2009 12:27 pm

lol yeah i slipped on a few parts... i could have gone back to change it but i already saved it and my pc shut down CEP... but thank you very much HKX means alot from ya dude... i'ma be doin alot more soon... stay on the look out... and i'ma work on that slippin shit... haha payce!!!

Kurse · Post by **Kurse** » Sat Jan 17, 2009 5:38 pm

Not a bad beat...I like the soft and slow violin-drag play and the vocal samples were a good plug-in.
You've definately elevated from your audios way back in the day. You've got your flow better in tact, but you're also learning how to really build around a concept through words.
It's good to see how you're coming along. You don't put out tracks consistantly, but you can see the obvious elevation from track to track.
All the extra little things you add in such as double-ups and ad-libs, which are things you never used in your earlier audios.
Definately good shit and this was probably you're best song to date. 8.5/10

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Sun Jan 25, 2009 3:30 am

thanks alot homie... appreciate that feedback... i'ma keep droppin... and i'ma get that illest collab done too lol... but thanx again

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