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eMCee Havic
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m#therf@cker im ill

Post by eMCee Havic »

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words are clearer than documents pressed in laminance
most rappers more scandalous than New jersey's canadites
my lryics have higher potency than the dankest cannabis
you cant handle this my salivias hotter than flowin lava
im more twisted than the plot when darth said "i am your father"
emcees ll' barter harder then tellers wit deadly robbers
a nasty flow like bacterially infested tap water
my style's larger than fat people stacking carbohydrates
i break more laws than terrorists break global mandates
i'll smoke a fat eighth an be more profolific than your entire fan base
my minds half baked even crazy people think this man's crazed
more fucked up than a seventh trimester abortion on a planned date
you can say that your styles fresher im birds mixed with alcacelzer
growing and building pressure an blow like condemned arcitechtures
flows smooth in texture so you can feel the words i say
so turn away or i'll terminate like cold kills seeds that germinate
the words i spray increase the murder rate like Meth n P.C.P.
you cant see me G like you were staring into a blank T.V screen
i beat these fiends like cyionide was placed inside your coffee cream
motherfucker im ill and i will kill whole cities in genocide
your friends ll die like my flows are airborn pathigens sent 2 flight
if words were money commerical rappers couldnt rent through life
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apreciate some feed on this peice

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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

this shit got slept on huh lol, rhymescheme is a bit better than the thief scripture, intro lacked some but it picked up half way on, also not a bad drop, overall pretty decent
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