Lyrically Broken

[Ambiguous Realm]

just an old track from back in the summer of 08,

the mixing was never fully finished

features on the 3rd verse

this is straight spittin no hook


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[The Gonz]

Sounds good, good flow, nice beat. I recognize it from somewhere, can't put a thumb on it. Delivery was on point. Overall, a good track.

[- Mutual -]

yeah the beat is real familiar
but nice spittin str8 lyrics
brought well with nice prescense on that shiit
nicely done congrats dudes
keep'em comin

[Ambiguous Realm]

yea its not an underground beat or anything, its off that redman and method man symphony, but it might've been off of somethin else even before that, anyways, appreciate the feed, still uppin for more, criticism as well

[HKX]

Koms dis was dope dawg like wat u did on it as well as Viral dis is an ol skoo beat I got a remixed version of it we should collab on dat one shit is dope i'll send it 2 u l8ter on aim if ur on l8ter on or on msn wat ever u use but shit sounds like it's mixed even if it's not I kno Viral be mixin da track up when he listens 2 da vocals jus like I do and savin it good shit dawg I'm ready 2 hear more 4rm u nigga u gettin better on ur shit

[Sordo.]

yeah mixing sucksssssss

fluent.. delivery aint much there..

i dont understand why its so hard to have emotion on a track, man..

why cant you dudes pull out some words and concentrate on delivering the words with some godamn emotion?

shit aint just about lyrics like this, trying to concentrate on some multis and shit

theres some parts where you get ya emotion/delivery up, but fuck

shit has so much potential to be ILL

and its just mediocre cause of that, take some words out and delivery some words with fuckin emotion

keep practicing, man

[Ambiguous Realm]

lol that's nice..

[Ambiguous Realm]

... don't be a dick and spam the thread cuz im better than u lol

[Lawgix]

wow.... whatta hater... newayz man as always this shit is pimp... u know what kind of good u did haha... i don't have to explain it... you and Viral are a dream team haha... newayz keep it up dude...

[~Symbolikull~]

shit was fire man

[eMCee Havic]

was this a freestyle or a written?

as a Freestyle shit was fire, good fluent mind work.

as a written, shit could have been a lot better, i love that method man beat tho, i'd like to get my hands on it, but yeah i give it a 6.5/10 you got good presence, but like the hater sordo (lol) you could have had some more feeling in your words, but i liked it non the less keep um comin and hook me up with some feed!!

stay ^

[TreTru]

uhh yeah i wanna give you honest feed so..

wasn't the best track i heard from ya..
i think it's lyrically sick..4 sure
u had 2 many syllables in certain places IMO
wich took away from ya delivery..but i hear what
ya tryin to do with ya flow..and it potentially lethal..haha
yeah mic presence needs a lil work...in this one.but
techically you've already elevated past this level so all good..
keep droppin that fire ..1

[Subsist]

viral killed it, but ekoms lacked the flow on this one.