Verbal Attack

[Phasewon]

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Just seeing what's up on this forum,
All feed is appreciated & returned...



[Phasewon]
Affirmative action, murderous rap, verbal attack
Word assassin, burnin the track, verses impact
To that of a bible scripture, when I let the rifle hit ya
God wouldn't save you if you had the twelve disciples with ya
I bet a vital mixture of knowledge and wisdom
And college precision, could get a scholar to acknowledge my mission
As god as my witness, I got this locked in submission
I got the ambition, spot my position through my optical vision
A prophet has risen, through the audible rhythm
In my harmonic rendition of Christ, the ebonic edition
Knock you outa commission, fundamentally
Mentally, I can master the game, instrumentally
Intellectually inclined, my cranial capacity
Could eventually define the brain and its anatomy
I'm actually too advanced for my enemies
Theoretically, hypothetically, you'll never be ahead of me
You'll remember me through every memory
The pen'll bleed, and pour out my pain, over heavenly melodies
Steadily pass my peak, I aint mastered my craft at least
Until every track released, is a classical masterpiece
The streets are negative, to sleep I need a sedative
The beef's irrelevant, but record execs reap the benefits
This is lethal penmanship; I beat mc's to death, it's
Deep imbedded, like to rap you have to have a speech impediment
Speak the deepest sentiments, to reach my peak intelligence
Releasin' evidence, with intent to impeach the president
I breach the censorship with freedom of speech
So tell the critics, look at my lyrics, and read 'em and weep[/align]

[The Gonz]

Good stuff. Multies and flow were on point. Welcome to the site.

[complexity]

Good stuff. Multies and flow were on point. Welcome to the site.

Thats an understatement.

It was a real nice piece man, 9.4/10. I would have loved to collab with you in my hayday. I love seeing emcees with Rakim influence.

[Brah-Vo]

Dude got a dope ass name and he got swagger too.
This piece was ill as hell. Most definately welcome to the site my dude.
Keep droppin. Would like to see more.

[Phasewon]

props for all the positive feed yall, much appreciated.

[Haz]

This Shit Deff Was Tough ..
Loved The Flow & Multis.. Would Sound Nice Ona Audio Track.. I'm Not Gunna Rate It just Cause i Dont Like Ratin Shit.. But I Want U 2 Stay around N Become Active Mos Def, We Could Use All The Dope Heads we Can Get ..


Affirmative action, murderous rap, verbal attack
Word assassin, burnin the track, verses impact
To that of a bible scripture, when I let the rifle hit ya
God wouldn't save you if you had the twelve disciples with ya
I bet a vital mixture of knowledge and wisdom
And college precision, could get a scholar to acknowledge my mission
As god as my witness, I got this locked in submission
I got the ambition, spot my position through my optical vision



That Shit Was Raw^...