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This was suppose to be a collab with scott, but he will never drop, so i'm just dropping this shit. Refer to be signature for further explanation.

often great with rhymes, walking-straight through caution-tape, swapping ur plates, with mine ||
my crimes are popping glocks at spines, behind the parking lot, cops on watch are blind ||
when me n scott, hit the block, with shots devine, you all can't keep up with the times, like a dead watch ||
left with bloods clots n ur head-squashed, we shine like corvettes when the reds-washed ||
I'lll throw scott at you from his dread-locks, so he's on pot and stays stoned like bed-rock ||
he still hits harder then fred-knocks, these bars have been hot, since i let off ||
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pretty dope, i liked the rhyme scheme definitely, the rhymes, and you even made me laugh here and there....this is the type of rapping you should do...it was different from most of your other pieces...
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ok....thanks for the feed/suggestions, i can without a doubt bring more comedy into my pieces
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Lmao @ a lot of views for this quick little piece. But I do 40 barz and get less. Lol
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