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Post by SolQet »

dis was only da second song i recorded but i think its still pretty strait.. da concept is bout how you can feel so lost, scared whateva in da "nightmares" of ya life but chu can look to atleast one person ta see ya thru it n things will be aiight. i fell in love wit da sample but im not sho where its originally from, but n e way lemme kno wats good, thanx homiess
~SolQet





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Post by HKX »

remember da 1st time I heard dis track I gotta give u props on dis shit 2

shit is dope u don't really hear females murkin beats like dis so its a surpise dat u be murkin beats like dis dat r beats dat myself would murda much props u flowed it on point shit is good imma be honest i like ur new caca better jus cuz u kno wat 2 do wit da emotion and all but dis shit is still crack girl good shit
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Post by Cuttin P »

man... a chick rappin!! that's refreshing!

damn girl ya lyrics are dark as hell... i like how ya mind works so far. you flowin on beat, tho i feel ya tone of voice is kinda monotoned cause it hardly changes. sounded like you were reading and recordin this at the same time. this song is pretty good... especially for ya second song!! you WAAAAAY better than i was on my second track! U lookin to be a beast in no time!
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Post by Kurse »

One of us on the squadd had murked this beat before...though i can't remember which one of us! (either that or one of us were planning and never came around to it...i'm not sure anymore! AHHHHHH LOL)
Either way...
...like Rigo said, your newer tracks you can hear your confidence building and emotion getting laced better. You can see where you blossom when you listen to the first and second track...and then listen to the 5th and 6th ones.
None the less...
...as emcees, we have more work to do! Hoping that you and beardo come over this week, that way you and I can work together on something. We'll go over some beats, write some fresh shit and I'll see if I can help you on how you execute your lyrical panderence.
As always...nice shit youngin. You're doing us all proud. Now your in for life. Like a gang. So there's no quittin. Or else we kill you.
Maybe drop you into a vat of boiling peanut butter.
The chunky kind.
That way it hurts.
Yea.....
...it's gonna hurt.
It's gonna hurt bad.
The chunks are gonna slice you over.
And the peanut buttery goodness will fill your nostrils to a point of suffocation.
It'll be like choking on a peanut butter sammich.
Only with no bread ofcourse.
Probably wheat bread.
Cuz most people hate wheat bread.

am I rammbling?

...?





...am I?



Good.
I don't give a fuck.





...and it's still gonna hurt.



Good job.
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^wow...wtf @ the describtion of the death lol
and ain't shit wrong with wheat bread!
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Post by SolQet »

lol you guys are crazy as hell.. but cuttin P thanks fo tha feed, i kinda feel tha same way bout how i delivered it, but i love da lyrics.. i got like 4 tracks in da makin ri now, one of which is almos finished.. which i think improvements will be pretty noticable on, but ill let yall be da judge of dat hahaa. n Kursee, we are gunna be rollin thru soon.. git down on some hot fiyah lol.
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Post by Dead Silence »

kurse:
Diverse did
lol

ne ways
kinda didnt like u on this track
voice didnt match it
i dk
lyrics were good.
but just ur style with this kinda beat wasnt on key

dk just my opinion
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Better watch what you say D.S.

....she just might twist ur nuts up in a battle. lol Girl is a FemBeast!
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damn mufuckin straait!
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Post by Petrafyne »

I Can Hear Wut You Sayn, It Would Be So Tight If You Did Your Back Up Tracks With Some Harmonies Know Wut I Mean, Of Course With More Confidence But Like If You Was Singin A Lil...You Got Everything It Takes With The Right State Of Mind You Could Go Far....I Can't Say This Enough, Everything Takes Repetition, You Have Accomplished Something With Every Track You Make No Matter Good Or Bad.

You Know I'm Feelin This, I Can't Wait To Hear Your Progression.
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Post by SolQet »

thanks fo da feed guys, i been takin all ya advice strait to da mic. woord

~SolQet
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