Duce Vs Crimson(5-2 Crimson wins)

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7 bars (LoL I Seen how you write your bars crim.. don't give us a life story)


Punches
Personals
Consistency
Flow
NamePlay/Wordplay

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Crimson ..Crimson tide so you get the wordplay
Crimson Tide = Alabama University

I'm..

Storing Wicked Damage Sir You're Just A Boring Listless Amateur
Its Obvious He Calls Up Ghost For Sex Like A Horny Spirit Channeler
Irrelevant Fag "I'll Body A Pussy" Like Seregant Cats,I'll Burn You Bitches
Beat His Lower Face!,Crimson Chin Wont Come Back Without Timmy Turner Wishes


This Man A Clean Source?, Hell Nah I'll Damage Ya Weak Corpse !
"And Rid Crimson Tide Of Destruction" Like An Alabama Peace Corp!
Seeing Me? Nah You Got Some Poor Vision Stop Your Dork Livin'!
He Such A Bitch..A Fucking Scrub!.. That I've Decided.[/b].
After I Knock You "Clean Out.. I'm Going To Mop The Floor With'em"!

Scrub..as in whipe..chea..



My Sniper Tactic Is Nice,Immaculate! This Destined Child Is A Faggot
Fag Placed The Title Of "Stalker On Q" Like A Pedophile Re-inactment
Ima Give You The Boot Friend,Guess I'll Be Testing This Foul Crew Then
You "Wouldn't See Crimson Surround Duce" With Irregular Bile Movements

Self Explanatory crimson = red..red as in blood..

He'll Be Afraid And Haunted You'll Get Beat Punk Until You Pay Your Homage
Doing Shows? A Gig'll Never Help Unless You Do A Comedic Stage Performance
Duce'll Degrade Ya Respect Then Slay You In Text Im Praised As A Vet
When I Bring Bat To Your Lungs You Could Say I Caved In Your Chest..

Mother Fucker..


Gig'll/Giggle..

Rest is self explanatory..

[crimson]

You're records 15 wins, 15 losses...? I'd hush if I were you....but I digress...




Ya seen his record???... who HASN'T beaten u, u can't TYPE A HOT BAR/ retire & 'cut ya losses'...whoops, now half the SITE'LL HAVE SCARS/ my bad, but don't worry if ya bleeding from that JAB IN THE VERSE/ cause I'm sure this pussy got some extra PADS IN HIS PURSE/



I approached this battle with both RAGE & RAPTURE for this NAMELESS RAPPER/ is SHAME A FACTOR?, Duce, you're getting SLAIN IN LAUGHTER/ But dog, if ya punches really ill u wouldn't have to EXPLAIN 'EM AFTER!!!/ the TRUTH'S STARTLELING, after this lost you'll have a reDUCEd FOLLOWING & all ya verses do is inDUCE VOMITTING




I thought it was a battle, he wanna play cards, fine...CHOOSE A STYLE/ with a GHOULISH SMILE, the FOOL REPLIED... " I pick strip poker...and DUCES ( deuces) WILD" / hmm.. maybe I'm just a JEALOUS CAT, and if you HOT, DOG u can RELISH THAT/ cause 15-15 is great.....well, if this were a TENNIS MATCH



Ok, fights over & this my LAST SWING on this CATS CHIN/matter fact just ASK HIM if he can MATCH CRIM/ I'm the shit & u can barely fart...but oh wait, ya loss collumn's about to PASS WINS (wind)/

[Haz]

Punches - Duce.
Personals - Crimson
Consistency - Crimson
Flow - Both
NamePlay/Wordplay - Duce

When It Came To Disses Crimson Swept It..
When It Came To Plays And Display Of Lyrical Content
Duce Took IT..

The "Hot , Dogg" Line Is Played , U FReshened The Play Though...

Overall Duce Got This Battle..
It Can Go Both Ways..

Overall Vote - Duce..

[Quix]

Punches - Duce
Personals - Crimson
Consistency - TIE
Flow - DUCE
NamePlay/Wordplay - Duce
OVERALL: DUCE



decent battle...but Duce's Lyrical ability took this one!! imo...both had above average verses...Nice fellaz!

[Logic]

both of these verses were forced to fuck..i cant even explain..

and neither verse was 7 bars..

duce..

your bars were slightly stretched and had little interbar rhyme, that fucked up the flow for me..and whatever multis you had were forced to fuck..

Storing Wicked Damage Sir You're Just A Boring Listless Amateur
Its Obvious He Calls Up Ghost For Sex Like A Horny Spirit Channeler
Irrelevant Fag "I'll Body A Pussy" Like Seregant Cats,I'll Burn You Bitches
Beat His Lower Face!,Crimson Chin Wont Come Back Without Timmy Turner Wishes

just an example..how does any of this stuff hurt him? chattin bout ghosts, cats, timmy turner? turn these concepts into PUNCHES, get at him where it hurts!

And Rid Crimson Tide Of Destruction" Like An Alabama Peace Corp!

that was ok..one of your best lines

You "Wouldn't See Crimson Surround Duce" With Irregular Bile Movements

this concept has SOO much potential!! but you fucked it with the delivery...put some thought into it..the line didnt even rhyme..a multi on bile movements would have been cool.

overall..i thought you had some concepts in there that could have hit hard..had you developed them into punches..only saw one personal in there and it was weakly constructed..crimson has a lot of potential for nameplay man! try focus on that

Crimson..

firstly i found your flow hard to follow in places..but thats a layout thing..as far as punches and personals go..you wiped the floor with him..multis were more on point too and your flow was better due to a lil more interbar rhyme

Ya seen his record???... who HASN'T beaten u, u can't TYPE A HOT BAR/ retire & 'cut ya losses'...whoops, now half the SITE'LL HAVE SCARS/ my bad, but don't worry if ya bleeding from that JAB IN THE VERSE/ cause I'm sure this pussy got some extra PADS IN HIS PURSE/

i could moan..and say that you could have flipped the opening line SOO much better..but fuck that..in the context of this battle these opening lines were fire and won it for me..just one thing..the 'type a hot bar' has no use in the punch..its just there to force the multi, but actually it fucks up the flow whereas multis are supposed to enhance it.

you fell off a lil with your next lines, but then came with some really nice wordplay

I thought it was a battle, he wanna play cards, fine...CHOOSE A STYLE/ with a GHOULISH SMILE, the FOOL REPLIED... " I pick strip poker...and DUCES ( deuces) WILD" / hmm.. maybe I'm just a JEALOUS CAT, and if you HOT, DOG u can RELISH THAT/ cause 15-15 is great.....well, if this were a TENNIS MATCH


as haz said..hot dog relish line is played! loving the deuces wild line! and the tennis match shit was funny as..great example of a good use of personals

no offence..but i hated the finisher..put more thought into it, that pass wins shit was really weak

this battle wasnt even close..i think crimson took every category

vote: Crimson

if any one could vote on this battle in return would be appreciated

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[Haz]

Crimson's Allowed To Discard One Vote..
Quixes Vote In Discarded..


1-1..

Upping Votes.

[repteelay]

Punches - duce
Personals - crimson
Flow - crimson
NamePlay - duce
Wordplay - duce
Consistency - crimson

vote - crims

[Haz]

Votes Please? ...

[Teflon]

I got bashed on the last battle i voted on because of my post count, if you don't want this vote I understand I'm just trying to vote on other peoples shit cause soon I'll have my own battles up..anyway

Duce:

Storing Wicked Damage Sir You're Just A Boring Listless Amateur
Its Obvious He Calls Up Ghost For Sex Like A Horny Spirit Channeler
*Nice opener liked it*

Irrelevant Fag "I'll Body A Pussy" Like Seregant Cats,I'll Burn You Bitches
Beat His Lower Face!,Crimson Chin Wont Come Back Without Timmy Turner Wishes
*Again pretty nice, started off the battle well*

This Man A Clean Source?, Hell Nah I'll Damage Ya Weak Corpse !
"And Rid Crimson Tide Of Destruction" Like An Alabama Peace Corp!
*haha liked that*
Seeing Me? Nah You Got Some Poor Vision Stop Your Dork Livin'!
He Such A Bitch..A Fucking Scrub!.. That I've Decided.[/b
*ehh wasn't feeling so much*

My Sniper Tactic Is Nice,Immaculate! This Destined Child Is A Faggot
Fag Placed The Title Of "Stalker On Q" Like A Pedophile Re-inactment
*decent wordplay was there decent punch*

Ima Give You The Boot Friend,Guess I'll Be Testing This Foul Crew Then
You "Wouldn't See Crimson Surround Duce" With Irregular Bile Movements
*lol liked that nice personal again with the wordplay*

Duce'll Degrade Ya Respect Then Slay You In Text Im Praised As A Vet
When I Bring Bat To Your Lungs You Could Say I Caved In Your Chest..
*nice wording, good closer decent concept hit and flowed nice tho*


Crimson:

Ya seen his record???... who HASN'T beaten u, u can't TYPE A HOT BAR/ retire & 'cut ya losses'...whoops, now half the SITE'LL HAVE SCARS/
*wish it was written different your style tho, decent opening lines*

my bad, but don't worry if ya bleeding from that JAB IN THE VERSE/ cause I'm sure this pussy got some extra PADS IN HIS PURSE
*this was hot liked the wordplay*


I approached this battle with both RAGE & RAPTURE for this NAMELESS RAPPER/ is SHAME A FACTOR?, Duce, you're getting SLAIN IN LAUGHTER/
*alright set up decent punch nice wording again

But dog, if ya punches really ill u wouldn't have to EXPLAIN 'EM AFTER!!!/ the TRUTH'S STARTLELING, after this lost you'll have a reDUCEd FOLLOWING & all ya verses do is inDUCE VOMITTING
*haha liked that personal a lot the explaining them line, lol nice punch*


I thought it was a battle, he wanna play cards, fine...CHOOSE A STYLE/ with a GHOULISH SMILE, the FOOL REPLIED... " I pick strip poker...and DUCES ( deuces) WILD" /
*Figuring your style out now nice setups, flowed nice when I read it right*

hmm.. maybe I'm just a JEALOUS CAT, and if you HOT, DOG u can RELISH THAT/ cause 15-15 is great.....well, if this were a TENNIS MATCH
*Lol another nice personal got me laughing, wouldn't of been a bad closing line*

Ok, fights over & this my LAST SWING on this CATS CHIN/matter fact just ASK HIM if he can MATCH CRIM/
*at first I was thinking too much praise on yourself don't care for that*

I'm the shit & u can barely fart...but oh wait, ya loss collumn's about to PASS WINS (wind)/
*Lol than I read this, very hot man again nice personal creative punch*


Overall good battle, both you guys had some strong punches...At first wasn't feeling Crimson much but each bar got better and better thats why

Vote=Crimson

[K KiLLaH]

Crimson had the better nameplay and wordplay but his lack of flow fucked up his delivery which in the end hurt his consistency which he couldn't afford to do against the back 2 heavy hitting quix

Fav line:
Crim couldn't sorround duce with irregular bowel movements/

If all of duces punches were delivered like that he woulda took the match easy

Overall vote:crimson

[1 !LL B!tch]

Punches - Duce
Personals - Crim
Consistency - Crim
Flow - Duce
NamePlay/Wordplay - Duce

Close battle boys but Duce had better punches/wordplay. He wasn't consistant cuz the 1st set of bars aint hit but picked up enough to grab the double U

Duce GMV

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[Ambiguous Realm]

one of duce's better battles imo.

my favorite line in this whole battle was [You "Wouldn't See Crimson Surround Duce" With Irregular Bile Movements] by duce

punches:crimson (puns were funnier by far)
wordplay:crimson (both were weak but crimson got it)
nameplay:crimson (not by too much)
personals:crimson (for record references)
rhymescheme:crimson (it was a lot more consistent)
flow:crimson (duce fell off a couple)
creativity:crimson (not by much..his just came off easier)
complexity:duce (duce put in more research for the name play)
entertainment: crimson (he just outdid duce overall)

vote: crimson (..basically a cat sweep, crimson made it look too easy, duce put in more effort but that might've effected u in a negative way..it happens)

count it or not.. i really dont care its not my loss

-- Sun Apr 26, 2009 8:23 pm --

im assuming all votes r being taken to a count

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