Take No More

[GrimBlaze]

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/it-wa ... tml#113509


SO, back to the broken boulevard of dreams/
back to the smoke and the guarded screams/
these the hardest scenes - from my cinamatic screen/
stabbed for a ten bag by psychopathic thieves/
so if hells got angels theres some demons in heaven/
cos on earth we got both seekin reason in weapons/
in the sidestreets n alleyways - scammin for papers/
makin money in our own way if the government rape us/
there's dealers, hustlers, killers n coke fiends/
older heads who school you on what life liven broke means/
these are our surroundings - you thinkin we crazy/
ive had at least four therapists tryin to save me/
take a look around how can these sins be forgiven/
use a vision from my iris see the way that we livin/
got the minimum wage, keep the lower class slaves/
either honoured in death or get anonymous graves/
put my life on the page at where im at- at this stage/
raised in a maze - braves lost in the haze/
bruised up n dazed by hollow strays that are killin us/
doin what i can but i dont know if its still enough/
this sickness o' the world got people wishin to die/
but man im sweatin in the kitchen for my piece of the pie/
n still modern culture bein fed to the vultures/
settin fire to the soul like this script made of sulphur/
theres gun epidemics - hypodermics in dust bins/
like dawn of the dead all the evil that dusk brings/
crushed kings n fallen soldiers litter the sidewalks/
n the gun powder plots cremate the people like guy fawkes...........

[ScottJames]

there's dealers, hustlers, killers n coke fiends/
older heads who school you on what life liven broke means/


n still modern culture bein fed to the vultures/
settin fire to the soul like this script made of sulphur/


was feelin them two bars the most... alls id say is extend ur multis a lil more n this would be WAY hotter...

[GrimBlaze]

thanks for feed.
i hear you on multis but in my opinion it wasnt really the right kinda drop for all that. sometimes you just wanna spit a tale n say whats on your mind.
time n a place for all things bro..1

[GrimBlaze]

^^

[K KiLLaH]

This peice was off the hook and dont you dont you dare try and dilute ur strong punching content and amazing flow by jacking it up with multis...like this is beyond text ur verse is perfectly written to be dropped on audio this has to be heard this is REAL TALK to the fullest and that my friend is what hip hop is all about~1



Favorite Lines
so if hells got angels theres some demons in heaven/
cos on earth we got both seekin reason in weapons/


got the minimum wage, keep the lower class slaves/
either honoured in death or get anonymous graves/

this sickness o' the world got people wishin to die/
but man im sweatin in the kitchen for my piece of the pie/

theres gun epidemics - hypodermics in dust bins/
like dawn of the dead all the evil that dusk brings/

[TheBigHurt~]

it's pretty dark but i dug it. cool

[GrimBlaze]

thanks for the feed peoples.

[GrimBlaze]

^^