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SHotz Fired! (hazzard shattered diss)

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Don't deleate this this time!!




SMH, you can't be serious wid those pre-school rhymes dog...lol





















Quix is Dominate! DisTRACT YAH DREAMS wid TRACKZ BOUT TRAGIC SCENES;
watch yah AHSMA WEEZE! DRASTICALLY! cuz i'm Picture Perfect Like PLASMA SCREENS
This a Stick up..Shit!, so don't move a muscle or even Hic-Cup Bitch!
i'll Slit-your Wrists! or just put the 'HArd shit to ya stomach' like those Sit-ups Did
you think your ill? i could give a Fuck dog; but your fail tah show some Tough Dropz!
read this...and this Thugz Lost! especially When your 'Lines are more elementary' than kids at the Bus Stop
Quix dah Shit...I'm Rude, Face It! you impress no one ILL your rapz have grew Basic!
i'VE got Ties to the streets...and you've only ever had 'Ties to defeat' like your ShoE Laces
i'll have your 'Honey in my bed! Giving me head; cuz Your just a Whack Funny Midgit!
Keep yah mouth shut, or i'll put 'Money on your head' like Cash money Fitteds!
you ain't dope, cool or gangsta, I'm Torching your Goals cuz your Forcing the Show
i'm putting Swords in yah Dome! cuz the only time we see 'HAzzard on the streets' is at the Forks in the Road
he saying his Nine be Decending?...he full of shit, and this This guys just Pretending!
yah met yah match...and you 'Must be off-line' because your Linez ain't Connecting
i can't stand duke, I'm Despising his soft lines while I stay Defining the Hot Rhymes!
Designing the Drop Wise! Fall back HAzz...cuz we'll only ever see 'hazzardz label' when Applying-peroxide
your not Nice you Trash Hazz; you just Attack chapz that Lack raps!
and the FActs that...your awefull and your only 'Coming up Short' like the Guy From Jack-Ass


Fall back like day light savings time…Bioootch!! I can do this ALLLLLL DAY





OWNED!!!! this is the FIRST and LAST HAZZ diss....he ain't even CLOSE to mah Level!!
























sorry sucka!
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cool, thanks for clearing that up!!! prciate it!


feeds welcomed!
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Re: SHotz Fired! (hazzard shattered diss)

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Quix wrote:Don't deleate this this time!!




SMH, you can't be serious wid those pre-school rhymes dog...lol





















Quix is Dominate! DisTRACT YAH DREAMS wid TRACKZ BOUT TRAGIC SCENES;
watch yah AHSMA WEEZE! DRASTICALLY! cuz i'm Picture Perfect Like PLASMA SCREENS

Nice.

This a Stick up..Shit!, so don't move a muscle or even Hic-Cup Bitch!
i'll Slit-your Wrists! or just put the 'HArd shit to ya stomach' like those Sit-ups Did

A bit gay.

you think your ill? i could give a Fuck dog; but your fail tah show some Tough Dropz!
read this...and this Thugz Lost! especially When your 'Lines are more elementary' than kids at the Bus Stop

Not an exceptional line. Pretty decent.

Quix dah Shit...I'm Rude, Face It! you impress no one ILL your rapz have grew Basic!
i'VE got Ties to the streets...and you've only ever had 'Ties to defeat' like your ShoE Laces

Kinda played. I still thought it was cool though.

i'll have your 'Honey in my bed! Giving me head; cuz Your just a Whack Funny Midgit!
Keep yah mouth shut, or i'll put 'Money on your head' like Cash money Fitteds!

Ill

you ain't dope, cool or gangsta, I'm Torching your Goals cuz your Forcing the Show
i'm putting Swords in yah Dome! cuz the only time we see 'HAzzard on the streets' is at the Forks in the Road

I've heard too many rhymes like this, but it was alright.

he saying his Nine be Decending?...he full of shit, and this This guys just Pretending!
yah met yah match...and you 'Must be off-line' because your Linez ain't Connecting

Alright.

i can't stand duke, I'm Despising his soft lines while I stay Defining the Hot Rhymes!
Designing the Drop Wise! Fall back HAzz...cuz we'll only ever see 'hazzardz label' when Applying-peroxide

I love the concept. I thought the punch could have been stronger or worded different.

your not Nice you Trash Hazz; you just Attack chapz that Lack raps!
and the FActs that...your awefull and your only 'Coming up Short' like the Guy From Jack-Ass

No.

Fall back like day light savings time…Bioootch!! I can do this ALLLLLL DAY

Good finisher.
I wouldn't give this much credit as a DISS. I would say that it was mixed with some decent nameplay and some cool punches. I'd rather not see any punchlines and just disses if the punches aren't going to hit. Its one thing to evoke subliminals throughout a verse, its another to dedicate a drop to him without at least burning him with a personal or two. I've done this from time to time as well, its just more effective to get some real disses in instead of having an ambiguous drop.
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there were maybe a couple ambigous lines


hazzard labels - he ain't on a label but talks like he should be
elementary lines - BASSSSIC ASSSSS LINES time and time again
offline line - half his lines don't make sense/Random...don't hit as hard as he thinks/hopes they do!
and coming up short line are all Personal!! - I beat him aka he came just a bit short!!



uhmm thought i would clerify that!!





but thanks tho!
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This Was Average..

we see 'HAzzard on the streets' is at the Forks in the Road

Didnt U Spit That Before Homie?? And I've Seen The Plasma Screens...
The Cash Money Line Wus Stupid.. Spittin A Money Play N Havin Money In It Is Wack In My Opinion..

None The Less This Was Cool... LoL Better Be Ready For My Next Drop...
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HAHAHA, IT Better be 100 times better than that Last WHACK diss!!
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Quix this reminds me a little bit of myself way your style of flow iz,
yeah homie keep em unda wraps like dinner plates & microwaves!!
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AIGH AIGH ^^ THANKS YOH!!
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this was pretty average a good couple of punches and the flow was pretty good sum of ya punches were cool a couple i think i've seen before but i hope haz can really stir up sum fire so her can bury yo ass lol jokin
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thanks hos!! your feeds (good or bad) is ALLWAYS welcome!






WELL, HE'S GONNA HAVE TO GET a lot BETTER and SOOOON!! no joke! lol
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