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GrimBlaze
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for a quick key its alright...i like ya last bar, would have liked it to be a bit longer tho, half a verse is hard to feed properly.
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Could Of Been Alot Loooonger...

Decent Wordplay.. Wording's Good...
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Fuckin Right it's Short, For What it Was There's Not Much Flaws. There's a Little Rust in There But The Flow Was Executed Smoothly as Usual, Good To See u Active Again Though.
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Decent wordplay but I would like to hear more!

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