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Tonights keystyle

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This alchemist calculates the calcules,-I decide to devide your skull into fragments,-Subtract the Brainmass And leave your thoughts stagnent,-With your words left Staggerin,-Your spitting a verse worse then Retarded Kidz,-
Think real hard on it,-
Your unable to stay onthought,-After This Bomb Drops,-Your left walking around lost,-Shell Shockd and Mentally Distraught,-
You find this Confusing,I find this amusing,-Your text it's left missing more content then gary busey,-
Your mental i,l Abuse it,-I,l Take a Crow bar to it and bruize it,-Throw one punch That will leave you with contusionz,-
I,m Ruthless,
I,l swallow razorbladez and make you take the chair, Its lights out when this barbor givez you a fade and spits with flair,-
I,m half impared,-Dont make me slip i,l take off your ear,-Hold it up to the speaker And make sure this is Clear,-I,m Here With more bangerz then the Chinese New Year,-I,m Nuclear,-I,l light the fuse and drop a nuke on "You Here"<<<<,-Let the smoke clear,And see half of you there,-
Get Ript Appart,
With the rest of your body parts scatterd over this scrapyard,-
Your text its like pick a part,-I,l pick your script appart,-
Your not that hard,
Your Armors made of Tin,-Man your contents got no heart,-In this contest your the mark,-When i start throwing out darts,you start folding your cards,-Your unable to compete,-With a hand full of hearts keep dealing out the beats,-I,l knock out your teath,And watch how you bleed,-face your defeat carryd out covverd by sheets,
In This Octagon i remain the U.F.C.......

just dropping this shit trying to shake the dust off
just a keystyle

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Re: Tonights keystyle

Post by eMCee Havic »

dug your opener
"This alchemist calculates the calcules,-I decide to devide your skull into fragments,-Subtract the Brainmass And leave your thoughts stagnent"

shit flowed good, but you structure is kinda fucked up, but overall a good keystyle, keep um droppin
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