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Sup ya'll? itz been a minute!

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Just a lil Key! holla itz been a minute!


i Remain a Beast, deranged someone you should refrane to reach!
leave Stains on feet, call me 'professeur psycho' like i'm Insane and Teach
can't Contain mah teeth, or sustain the heat i put on when i Hold the chrome!
i told you homez! i'M Seeing Real Estates .... like i just Sold your home
i'm gold wid scopes! and i shit on yah Clout and Send yah Cred Head SHots!
and clipz tah yah house! showing yah bladez, rachetz n infered red Dotz
you'll never come close to where mah Potential Is, check the Credentials Bitch!
take dah gun and 'Poke yah dome! cuz i keep it 'Close tah home' like Resedential Kidz
I use dah shotty and spill clipz ... and keep either the blade or dah forty Cal tah kill Quick!
n burn ya wid da fire ...and have you 'Rolling on the floor' like me after seeing Alpha Bills Pic!
Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???

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Post by Phasewon »

dope shit, nice use of multies all over the place, alot of 'em were forced, but the punchlines made up for it, overall a solid lil verse, stay droppin'.
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which ones were forced??
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i thought it was pretty awesome, keep posting.
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

I'm going to be real with you
Flow Was Cool.. Multis Were Cool Punches Were Okay..More On The Weak Side

Overall this was A low-Middle weight drop.. i'm sure you can do better then this
Alpha Bill: I told a girl I wanted to suck the juice out of her so she sat on my face today

Lmao Wierd ass Nigga
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