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Decrepid~Thoughts

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thoughts decrepit, psycho-analyzed but left neglected
there all connected, but split like personalities livin separate
i feel infested, creepy crawlies living inside a question
my new profession, capturing mind state inside a session
brain's compressions, draw the blue prints like architects
fingers spark the text, the next step and the smartest yet
the sharp impress, my words are weapons Tony Stark invents
the darkness prince, crowned by the shadows in the blackness
i live in practice, not an actor but wouldn’t mind an actress
raps not the fastest, but the turtles lappin on the rabbit
im not an addict, but i planned to smoke out the planet
my military tactics, are always on mind when i serve rhymes
I’m sure I’m, contradictive like a symboligist who burns signs
done the first time, the word surgeon stitchin syllables
only by living pivotal, will release the deep and illest known
which fills the dome, to mastered thought thats built of stone

uppin for some feed on this peice here
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"see you shouldnt be afraid of me..
you should be afraid of all the people in the streets
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this is great
i loved the vocab
went with the flow
the deepness sorta complexity shyt
i really think u've come along way from when u started here
this is one of my fav scripts i've fed today
nice piece dude hope u continue to elevate

the darkness prince, crowned by the shadows in the blackness
i live in practice, not an actor but wouldn’t mind an actress
raps not the fastest, but the turtles lappin on the rabbit
im not an addict, but i planned to smoke out the planet

Dope^
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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uppin for some more feed
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"see you shouldnt be afraid of me..
you should be afraid of all the people in the streets
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