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Quik drop

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Ayo the monster inside just cant sit still/
conquerin the prize is on the side when it feels this real/

givin the exeptions that its granted/
probually till my heads at least finally restin n im planted/

beneath the surface, but even then imma still eat for certain/
and with them snakes in the grass i put the heat to serpents/

but on some other shit i want the whole government/
to stand in path and feel the wrath of what we suffer wit/

and dont let em run make em skip threw and its wit this music/
there plan stands grand and we hip to it/

the only time you show aggression is wen you holdin weapons/
imma let you kno my full intensions..

thats to break into the studio and pull ya whole session/
blow up the booth and piss on the disk that ya flows left in/

-- Tue May 26, 2009 3:28 pm --
LETS GET SOME FEED PLS....shit
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the only time you show aggression is wen you holdin weapons/
imma let you kno my full intensions..

thats to break into the studio and pull ya whole session/
blow up the booth and piss on the disk that ya flows left in/

^^ ending was my favorite flowed like fire, i'd like to see some more of your shit havent really heard or read ya shit in a while, but it was dope
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Ayo the monster inside just cant sit still/
conquerin the prize is on the side when it feels this real/

Goin In..


givin the exeptions that its granted/
probually till my heads at least finally restin n im planted/

Alright...


beneath the surface, but even then imma still eat for certain/
and with them snakes in the grass i put the heat to serpents/

Really Liked This Line For Some Reason .. Lmfao Just Reminded Me Of Some Smack Shit..

but on some other shit i want the whole government/
to stand in path and feel the wrath of what we suffer wit/

Word... I'm Feeling This.. Like How U Keep a Hold Of Where ya bars goin..

and dont let em run make em skip threw and its wit this music/
there plan stands grand and we hip to it/

Dont Really Like This.. See Where U Were Goin



the only time you show aggression is wen you holdin weapons/
imma let you kno my full intensions..

LoL @ The holdin weapons part

thats to break into the studio and pull ya whole session/
blow up the booth and piss on the disk that ya flows left in/

Lmfao at First i Wasn't Feelin The First Line but The Second One is Better Could Of Been Worded Better...


Anyways this Was Solid.. You Just Have Things To Work On .. Just Like Everyone Else..

Anyways Good shit.. Keep Droppin
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thanks for the feed i appreciate it.....
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thought the first 3 bars were the best, the endin flowed nice too.. overall solid short piece man keep em comin
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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