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Lyrical Insanity

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the names modern defiance, i stay defiant never been compliant
i'll strangle an emcee with the cord from a home appliance
never silent i keep the flow pumpin like a monolog an uncommon dog
rippin verses til the problems solved colder than frozen haugen daus'
i am the comondant generally higher on the chain than your generals
i keep the blend with flows with out the use or abuse of chemicles
my tenticles will rend my foes incompasitated and exasperated
im jaded way past faded like i was lacerated and that pain has invaded
i stash my blades an infiltrate um like i was solid snake
i'll grab a man and maul his face burn my path and abolish fate
thats all it takes for me to spit the script the tastiest way
demonic i'll make an atheist pray on my slowest an lazyest day
never fading away i'll keep my style authentic and prominant
the species leader i'm dominant so you better use your common sense
i'm droppin bombs in print like printin pictures of a cruise missle
dangerous like booze n pistols whoes an issue? damn this dudes offical
i keep your fuedal insults as a joke that i'll be laughing at
as i'm reflecting glancing back wonderin where your passions at



heres a piece i've been workin on, just need some input to see if its worthy or not of more time and effort

uppin
Last edited by eMCee Havic on Mon Jun 01, 2009 10:21 am, edited 2 times in total.
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"see you shouldnt be afraid of me..
you should be afraid of all the people in the streets
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Re: Lyrical Insanity

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yeah this was good
nice lyricism
sum dope punches
nice flow not to choppy
sum dope vocab
real underdog shyt hahah
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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thanks man, i'll look for something to feed on of your shit,

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