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Green And Such (Daft Punk Shit Negro)

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Cut it, Grate it, Grind it, Break it ..||
Pack it, Hold it, Bake it, Roll it ..||
Chew it, Light it, Vapourize it ..||
Twist And Roach it, Sit And Smoke it ..||


Donno How Much Of My Fucking Life-ive-Wasted ..||
igniting-Flames-And Getting Baked Until My Eyes-Are-Asian ..||
Everytime i Try To Fight-Temptation im Back To Lighting-Up ..||
Because Old Habits Die Hard, it's Like Without it My Life-Would-Suck ..||
But We Know it Ain't True, We're Just Seasoning-Daily-Life ..||
We Ain't Needing-To-Blaze-The-Pipe, it's a Breeze-if-u-Take-it-Right ..||
Smokin Trees-From-The-Day-Till-Night ..||
Keepin The Peace, Hardly Causing Scenes-Or-Creating-Fights ..||
Sure People Can Rely-On-it, Some Stop After Trying-it ..||
But i Found The Happy Medium, And That is Why i-Love-it ..||
And Sure People-Will-Hate, But We Don't Feed-Off-The-Bait ..||
Cause it's Funny Stoners Usually Succeed-More-Than-Fakes ..||
u Don't Like it ? Then Don't Do it, Simple-as-That ..||
So Quit The Tittle-And-Tat,
Cause Compared To Weed ur Favourite Fuckin Tipple-is-Bad ..||

And So We...

Cut it, Grate it, Grind it, Break it ..||
Pack it, Hold it, Bake it, Roll it ..||
Chew it, Light it, Vapourize it ..||
Twist And Roach it, Sit And Smoke it ..||


Everyone Got Their Tastes, And Blazing-is-One-Of-Mine ..||
Anything Entertains Me And i End Up Wasting-a-Ton-Of-Time ..||
When i Ain't Got Shit To Do, And it's Good at Parties-Too ..||
Especially When The Booze Runs Out, inkie Pinkie Parly-Boo ! ..||
it's Great On ur Own, When ur Just Kicking-Back ..||
Maybe After a Long Day, Take a Hit-And-Relax ..||
ur Favourite Food's Good ? Well After a Smoke-it's-Better ..||
This is Why You'd RATHER Have it When u Got it, There's No-Contender ..||
Dissecting Music u Listen To, On a Much Deeper Level ..||
Some People Claim After Smoking it That They Speak To The Devil ..||
And They Blame The Weed, Not The Fucking idiot-Claiming ..||
He's Hearing Voices, it's About Time We Got Rid-Of-The-Framing ..||
What's interesting Sober, is Even Moreso-When-High ..||
u Start Thinking About Like... Who invented Morse-Code-And-Why ? ..||
Then u Read All About it, it's Fun as Shit-at-The-Time ..||
it's Really Hard To Believe This Fuckin Shit-is-a-Crime ..||

im Going To Leave More Feed Later.

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Re: Green And Such (Daft Punk Shit Negro)

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multis were insane, flow was kinda off.. but i do agree with the subject matter, smoking green is always good. infact im smokin right now. but i liked the piece, the chorus wasnt the greatest i've seen. but i suck a choruses too. so its no thing. verses where tight and stayed on topic for the most part. a good solid drop. keep it up homie
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Re: Green And Such (Daft Punk Shit Negro)

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I dunno wtf Defiance is talkin about man, but im outta here to go and buy me sum more fukn stash!
That shit was Most definately(to me) The best piece I have seen on illest and what you were sayin just got me into the feelin.
The chorus was fuckin great, the flow was the shit, and the multis just redefined my viewpoint on how to write a good piece.
Ima go get some Zol now...

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Re: Green And Such (Daft Punk Shit Negro)

Post by K KiLLaH »

lol scotch halls the truth lmao 8)
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Re: Green And Such (Daft Punk Shit Negro)

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Modern Defiance Honestly Mate ive Written Like... 2 Hooks in My Life Lol, But To Be Fair This One Was a Reworking Of a Daft Punk Hook, i Never Really Use Hooks in My Writtens.

Thanks For The Feed Guys im Getting Around To Returning it Now. Keep Smokin 8)
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Re: Green And Such (Daft Punk Shit Negro)

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damm this is fire from DOMINO right here
dunno how u pulled this off so well
the multies an punches were dope
the hook i found to be nicely flowed
the second verse prolly my fav
dope dope dope shyt
mayne very nice u shud make this into a track
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Re: Green And Such (Daft Punk Shit Negro)

Post by Cee4 »

haha i thought the hook was dope!
daft punk are the shit

the whole thing was good as usual and i thought you summed up weed perfectly and accuratley.

Smokin Trees-From-The-Day-Till-Night ..||
Keepin The Peace, Hardly Causing Scenes-Or-Creating-Fights ..||

ur Favourite Food's Good ? Well After a Smoke-it's-Better ..||

Then u Read All About it, it's Fun as Shit-at-The-Time ..||
it's Really Hard To Believe This Fuckin Shit-is-a-Crime ..||

^^^
all true shit.

anyway i liked some of the little detail you emtioned. i also liked how you kinda kept to a serious tone throughout. no beastiallity or anything lol

anyway im off to amsterdam tommorrow and this got me in the mood
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Re: Green And Such (Daft Punk Shit Negro)

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Bump, Calling All Tokers. :lol:
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