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Gutta
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Freestyle

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If i run out of that lead, at least Im keepin pens
leave a nigga grill steamin like a overheated Benz
Im going deep for ends, to where u dont see the sea extend
Where there aint no need to leap a fence
After committing a ten to fifteen offence
King of the jungle keeping it bubble
Hard to move ya weight, when ya knees deep in the struggle
Keep brining em trouble, my heater can kill
any tribe leader at will, he was for real, let me read him his will
I see you wit chills, Got the beretta shakin' often
Nigga throw ya lead up, neva hesitate to off him
Like the 70's generation Dolphins
We never taking losses, just celebrating lots cuz
Now my mazaratti go faster then when the shotti blow
Gotti doe, lot of hoes lettin they poonani's show
Only seventeen, poppin quicker, then any nigga u ever seen
Ya boi dead indeed, crop the picture, let em bleed
Stop the bicker, Bout to piss on these niggas, just drop the zipper
I'll kill u dawg, lyrically or with tha ber-etta. its wut-eva//
cuz u kno i squeeze arms like I'm checkin my blood pressure//


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Engraved in Tyson
Curse the shots that left BIG and Pac lifeless
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eMCee Havic
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Re: Freestyle

Post by eMCee Havic »

I see you wit chills, Got the beretta shakin' often
Nigga throw ya lead up, neva hesitate to off him

that was my favorite part there

the flow was off in many places, i spit it to a beat and found that its got too many words or too few words in places, like you were all over the place. but for a key it was straight. and some of it hit pretty hard. no real topic but a lot of spits dont. over all a solid drop. keep the flows coming homie

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Re: Freestyle

Post by Quix »

are you ever gon post our collab gutta??
Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???

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