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[m.c velly]

My Words Diabolic Mc's Follow This Cause - Wit Styles So Fermented Im Senteced In Offal Discharge
I Shatter Your Defences With An Offensive Like Gods; M.C Wreckin These Pages And Leavin Em Scarred
Vellys beatin The Odds Like A Book On Your God ; Then I Speak So Fuckin Evil Your People Look At Me Cross
A Lethal Weapon - Verses Deeper Than satans Coffin ; The Chemical Chemist Way Sicker Than Basic Toxins..

jus started this peice. whatcha think so far.

[eMCee Havic]

that was pretty dope man, a lil simple, but it flowed well... way too short tho.. but i liked it for a quick read

keep um coming man

[Momeijah]

imagery Was Pretty Good And The Flow Was Solid, i Can't Really Leave Detailed Feed Since it's So Short But if u Carry it On Keep it Up Because a Whole Verse at That Level Would Be Dope.

[The Gonz]

Shits not bad. Good flow. Presentation could be a little more user friendly i.e. seperate bars. Makes it easier to read, but I had no problem pickin up the flow. I have a sixth sense for that shit. Definitely needs more added to it though. Finish this shit off and post it again. Good start though.

[ReCkinAll]

i think it was decent...


keep droppin...

[- Mutual -]

My Words Diabolic Mc's Follow This Cause -
Wit Styles So Fermented Im Senteced In Offal Discharge
I Shatter Your Defences With An Offensive Like Gods;
M.C Wreckin These Pages And Leavin Em Scarred
Vellys beatin The Odds Like A Book On Your God ;
Then I Speak So Fuckin Evil Your People Look At Me Cross
A Lethal Weapon - Verses Deeper Than satans Coffin ;
The Chemical Chemist Way Sicker Than Basic Toxins..

jus started this peice. whatcha think so far.

u shoulda set it out like this