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this is where they bleed blocks and flee cops, tha streets hot
aint nobody got that fiya shit as much as we got
git higha than tree tops,
droppin like tha leaves in tha fall
i got mo flava than some seasonin salt
even tha atheist gon be believin us all
if u lived it thru my eyes, you wont believe what u saw
nigga fuck wit me today, ya family grievin tommaw
im so sicc wit it i spit and you dry heavin an all
cast a weary eye
made a calist heart from a teary eye
niggaz used to think they can git ova, but they fear me nah'
bet they hear me nah
plant a seed an make tha block bleed
when it grow, i grow and
like it or not you caint stop-me
on mah grind, hustle, paper chase, call it what u call it
u can betcha bottom dolla i aint in it for no small shit,
aaw shit, this niggaz at it again
im jus to bad ta defend, bleedin on a pad wit a pen

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pretty good shit, kind of started rambling towards the middle-end, but the multies was on point, flow was on point, the structure seemed a lil off based on the way it was typed up, but I caught the flow no problem, so shit would definitely sound smooth over a beat, solid verse.
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aight, thas wussup ...preciate

i done spit that over a beat, no doubt..it go hard too

check tha myspace if you get a second..
ya boy know what he doin...

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Post by The Gonz »

This shit was pretty nice. I was expecting a bunch of gunplay and redundancy, but this caught me a little off guard. It isn't overly complex, but its smooth and has some nice lines in it. Don't know why, but it reminded me of Slim Thug. Not in subject material, but the swagger. Good shit, though.
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Sick flow homie
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it was ight, last couple lines were decent to end it i thought
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much apreciated, thanks fa tha feed ...

just on some "warm up shit, feel me ..

get to see what kind of heads on here

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