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The Punisher (Multis read n feed)

Post by eMCee Havic »

on that Big Pun Multi, murderous tip. just a key
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i'm graphicly-past those that be hatching-attacks
while grabbin-tha-mac i'm gradually bashin-em-back
hearts ashy-an-black so from cops i'm stashin-the-facts
the master-is-back locked, loaded n unlatchin-the-strap
put your cap-in-the-grass grey matter on-the-pavement
while calm-an-patient underground i'm bombin-basements
these palms-r-face-lifts emcees get knocked-n-slayed-quick
i talk-n-stay-sick my enemies get chalked-n-stay-stiff
so walk-away-quick before i change my mood-n-attitude
i'm rude-n-mad-at-u the teacher ll school-the-baddest-dudes
cool-n-strapped-wit-2 big balled i rule-wit-massive-jewels
i soothe-wit-graphic-tunes the dark hearted-n-demented
i departed-wit-intentions to come back sharper-wit-inventions
in darkness-i-am-mentioned cause in light im crushin-ya-ass
so don't rush-in-attack cause homie,, the punishers-back


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Post by Mac »

Damn Son, Shit Was Dope, Multies Was Bananas Yo'. Well Done Man, Keep Dropping Pieces Like This An You Be Aight.
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Flow And Multis Were Spot On. But When it's The 'Theme' Of ur Drop, They Can Be Overpowering And Take Up What Could Be Better Lines Since u Concentrate On The Rhymescheme More. if i Heard This On Audio it Would Be Awesome, But a Multi Drop With Just as Much Emphasis On Things Like imagery And Punchlines (if it Was This Style Of Drop Anyway) Would Make it a Lot More Vivid. No Complaints Though Man Keep it Up.
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thanks for the feed, still uppin this shit
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you definately got a way wit words homebua ...

original, refreshin, unpredicatable ..

well done bua'


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thanks instrumental.

still uppin this bitch
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nice multi work we should do a collab you saw da Spaz-a-HaLLiK we can str8 smash it on the multis
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yeah homie i'm down, pick some kinda subject matter and we'll go from there
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