M.O.E vs Menace (MenaCe 5-2)

MOEstradamus · Post by **MOEstradamus** » Wed Jul 01, 2009 6:58 am

ok 4 bars

house cats

due in 30 mins

check

-MenaCe- · Post by **-MenaCe-** » Wed Jul 01, 2009 7:00 am

And Here We Go!

Get it clear you could hold ya Pride with the Tightest Grip..
Lookin for the win but inside your to blind to come in Sight Of It..In need of more then a Minor Fix..
And i was wrong you aint a square but more compared to a triangle the way you Recycle Shit!!..
Need to practice Steps For Years cause who the fuck would wanna Lend An Ear..
To a Local Lame that couldn't get a single soul to Know His Name even wit the Set Of Cheers..
On your ass is where you need to stay lookin for the Easy Win..
cause ya styles broke down just like the whip your dad and that bitch Concieved You In..DAMN!

All Ya life your Finishin Face First..Been a no body since the Minute She Gave Birth!!..

MOEstradamus · Post by **MOEstradamus** » Wed Jul 01, 2009 7:03 am

lol no 4 bars as in 8 lines

-- Tue Jun 30, 2009 4:35 pm --

Get off of my feet before I start kickin-ya-far, only if I put * in ya rhymes are dey hittin-da-stars...*
call me batman by da way i have dis joka in bars, and your only gettin a "deal" when your given-out-cards//**

now trapped behind bars, ya never gettin-freedom, cuz im so "raw" and ya just a fuckin-fiend-son...
I'll show ya da heat and have ya duckin-mean-guns, and leave ya"smoken" so bad ya need nicatene-gum//***

Now im thinkin im done, I don't need four bars I'll end dis homo-early...
a hit? i ain't worried, cuz only gotta "9" on him if he came reppin a Romo-jersey//****

i did dis ina hurry, wat im sayin is true, i could battle menace and even reckinall too...
i couldnt picture your game if its on youtube, da funny thing is the only votes you ever got came from you-dude//*****

*putin * in is rhyme would only havein hittin da stars get it
**record deal and he only gets to deal when hes givin out cards
***smokers try nicatene gum to quit smokin
****Tony romo wears da #9 for dallas cowboys
*****reckinall always voted for him but den ppl say dey are the same person due to ip address

-- Tue Jun 30, 2009 7:31 pm --

ok menace ill give you till midnight my time which is in 3 and a half hours from now if you don't den ima call for a close.

K KiLLaH · Post by **K KiLLaH** » Thu Jul 02, 2009 11:16 am

RE-OPENED & RESET because MOE didnt want me to close the thread anyways i edited menace's verse in anyways let the votes begin.

LunGzZ · Post by **LunGzZ** » Thu Jul 02, 2009 12:03 pm

Get it clear you could hold ya Pride with the Tightest Grip..
Lookin for the win but inside your to blind to come in Sight Of It..In need of more then a Minor Fix..
And i was wrong you aint a square but more compared to a triangle the way you Recycle Shit!!..
[I liked this line, the structure was off, but the flow was decent near the end, and the punch/personal hit, I liked it, good opener...7.5/10]
Need to practice Steps For Years cause who the fuck would wanna Lend An Ear..
To a Local Lame that couldn't get a single soul to Know His Name even wit the Set Of Cheers..
[Wtf, where did all this come from? Dope flow and multies here, punch was ncie too, def best bar ive seen from you...8.5/10]
On your ass is where you need to stay lookin for the Easy Win..
cause ya styles broke down just like the whip your dad and that bitch Concieved You In..DAMN!
[pffft!!! lmao...jokes line, funny, not hugely hitting but jokes none the less...7.5/10]

TOTAL:::Seems like you improved a lot in the last couple of days...Lol...23.5/30

Get off of my feet before I start kickin-ya-far, only if I put * in ya rhymes are dey hittin-da-stars...*
call me batman by da way i have dis joka in bars, and your only gettin a "deal" when your given-out-cards//**
[I used the Joker/Card play before you lol but still, nice opener, didn't like the setup though...7.5/10]
now trapped behind bars, ya never gettin-freedom, cuz im so "raw" and ya just a fuckin-fiend-son...
I'll show ya da heat and have ya duckin-mean-guns, and leave ya"smoken" so bad ya need nicatene-gum//***
[lol flow and multies were here as well as a decent punch too. Wasn't that hard hitter you wanted but it was still nice...7.5/10]
Now im thinkin im done, I don't need four bars I'll end dis homo-early...
a hit? i ain't worried, cuz only gotta "9" on him if he came reppin a Romo-jersey//****
[the flow killed this bar for me brother. Decent concept but you killed it for me with the structure...6/10]
i did dis ina hurry, wat im sayin is true, i could battle menace and even reckinall too...
i couldnt picture your game if its on youtube, da funny thing is the only votes you ever got came from you-dude//*****
[LMAOOOOOO!!!!!!!! JOKES personal man, thats fucking nice, lmaoooooo....Structure and flow was off, but nice personal anyways...7.5/10]

TOTAL:::Work on that structure and grammar, it takes away from your verse if it isn't edited properly! 28.5/40

VOTE:::::well in the end, this being another close battle I voted on, it came down to consistency. MOE's verse had a 72% hit rating, wheras Menace had a 78% hit rating. Both were good but Menace seemed to improve alot since his last outing...He gets my vote.

-MenaCe- · Post by **-MenaCe-** » Thu Jul 02, 2009 12:48 pm

1-0 Uppin!

eMCee Havic · Post by **eMCee Havic** » Fri Jul 03, 2009 4:24 am

opener- menace
closer-menace
punches-tie
personals- M.O.E
Enjoyment-Tie
multis- M.O.E
Flow- MEnace

O/V- Menace

menace just came harder i thought. moe was kind of all over the place with his punches and pers. Menace was more direct and harder.

2-0

bump bump bump it up

-MenaCe- · Post by **-MenaCe-** » Fri Jul 03, 2009 5:28 am

Uppin!!

Teflon · Post by **Teflon** » Fri Jul 03, 2009 10:59 am

Another solid battle second I've read in two days I'm liking these new kids coming a lot better than the new kids I was battlying when i started anyways...

Menace:

Get it clear you could hold ya Pride with the Tightest Grip..
Lookin for the win but inside your to blind to come in Sight Of It
*At first I was slightly confused thought the "In need of more than a minor fix" went at the end of that second line, and that shit was just stretched now I read again and see it was a mistype, I think...Anyways ok opener nothing special*

In need of more then a Minor Fix..
And i was wrong you aint a square but more compared to a triangle the way you Recycle Shit!!..
*Now this was creative liked the recycle triangle shit, simple but nice*

Need to practice Steps For Years cause who the fuck would wanna Lend An Ear..
To a Local Lame that couldn't get a single soul to Know His Name even wit the Set Of Cheers..
*ok line cheers shit was solid*

On your ass is where you need to stay lookin for the Easy Win..
cause ya styles broke down just like the whip your dad and that bitch Concieved You In..DAMN!
*lol made me laugh, good sign...Nice closer man*

Overall solid verse, creative.

Moe:

Get off of my feet before I start kickin-ya-far, only if I put * in ya rhymes are dey hittin-da-stars...*
call me batman by da way i have dis joka in bars, and your only gettin a "deal" when your given-out-cards//**
*I love ur set ups, punch was decent, ok personal the joker thing with his sig, but not a bad punch better opener than Menaces*

now trapped behind bars, ya never gettin-freedom, cuz im so "raw" and ya just a fuckin-fiend-son...
I'll show ya da heat and have ya duckin-mean-guns, and leave ya"smoken" so bad ya need nicatene-gum//
*didn't like the set up (haha even tho just complimented u for those) and it was ehh ok overall*

Now im thinkin im done, I don't need four bars I'll end dis homo-early...
a hit? i ain't worried, cuz only gotta "9" on him if he came reppin a Romo-jersey//****
*haha this was ok, more simple than any other bar, but hit ok*

i did dis ina hurry, wat im sayin is true, i could battle menace and even reckinall too...
i couldnt picture your game if its on youtube, da funny thing is the only votes you ever got came from you-dude//*****
*Another nice personal, and another tight closer, both of you came nice with the closers, and this got me laughing*

Overall a solid verse better than the other one I read of urs that I didn't vote for you on.

After my initial read I thought Menace won this knew MOE had a few ok punches but thougth Menace came nicer, than I read again and overall I liked MOE's more to make sure I read a third time and I do..Nice battle tho Menace one of ur better verses man for real whoever u are uve elevated, the verse against me and this one here were both nice man..Just felt moe's personals put it a lil over the top

Vote= MOE

-MenaCe- · Post by **-MenaCe-** » Sat Jul 04, 2009 4:57 am

2-1..Uppin

K KiLLaH · Post by **K KiLLaH** » Sat Jul 04, 2009 5:48 am

This was a tough one thats why i didnt wanna just vote right away anyways heres a serious category break down

Opener: Tie
Punches: Tie
Personals: M.O.E
Enjoyment: Tie
Multis: M.O.E
Flow: MenaCe
Consistency: MenaCe
Originality: M.O.E
Closer: MenaCe
Delivery:....MenaCe

MenaCe came hard a lil bit harder than more i mean M.O.E came hard but consistency delivery and that wicked closer stole still match for MenaCe barely...

Vote: MenaCe...barely

-MenaCe- · Post by **-MenaCe-** » Sat Jul 04, 2009 5:59 am

3-1...Uppin!

TreTru · Post by **TreTru** » Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:27 am

opener-moe..that opener was well worded with an decent punch better flow multis and such
punches-menace..if moe worded and flowed the romo punch i would've gave him this
personals-moe...his closer was a good personal..
multis- menace-had a few more triples so he took this one..
flow-tie...moe's is easier for me to catch on to but the romo jersey hit went sour..men's structure's a lil funky so even
enjoyment-menace..i got alot of kicks outta menaces verse
closer-moe..mens closer was the 'at birth' punch.. and it was missing a line...

this shit was waaaayyy closer then this cat breakdown percieves good battle to both damn....all in all though i gotta say that if it came up even i would've gave this to MOE anyway cuz i was on when they set this battle and it was supposed to be a 30 min drop,moe dropped right away and menace took a couple of days ....good shyt from both regardless..

vote=M.O.E.

-MenaCe- · Post by **-MenaCe-** » Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:37 am

3-2...Uppin

MOEstradamus · Post by **MOEstradamus** » Sat Jul 04, 2009 1:29 pm

dam dis gona be a good battle im glad we went thru with it

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