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MenaCe vs -.HaZarD.- ( Menace wins by Most Votes 3-2)
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MenaCe vs -.HaZarD.- ( Menace wins by Most Votes 3-2)
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Re: MenaCe vs -.HaZarD.-
Listen!
Watch and see how i most properly drop this weak Known Mockery..
Cause logically his drops rot nowadays the way there So Obsolete!!..***
I see ya pushin 50 so this means that hill ya gettin Thrown Over..
And for Full Closure imma drag you all around like they Tow Mowers!!..***
It didn't take plenty barz to leave heavy scars on your Frail Surface..
My Punches Impale Perfect while Haz drops sound like never heard sunny and Cher Verses!!..
For years you Stood UnNoticed finally got a grip and Couldn't Hold It Since Put in Motion..
Reconize the only time you'll get it "hands down" is on your casket when i Push to Close It!!..
**Obsolite-OLD FASHIONED..
**Pushin 50-His loss record..
**Tow Mowers- ppl tryin to make money cuttin lawns pull lawn mowers on the back of a bike..
Watch and see how i most properly drop this weak Known Mockery..
Cause logically his drops rot nowadays the way there So Obsolete!!..***
I see ya pushin 50 so this means that hill ya gettin Thrown Over..
And for Full Closure imma drag you all around like they Tow Mowers!!..***
It didn't take plenty barz to leave heavy scars on your Frail Surface..
My Punches Impale Perfect while Haz drops sound like never heard sunny and Cher Verses!!..
For years you Stood UnNoticed finally got a grip and Couldn't Hold It Since Put in Motion..
Reconize the only time you'll get it "hands down" is on your casket when i Push to Close It!!..
**Obsolite-OLD FASHIONED..
**Pushin 50-His loss record..
**Tow Mowers- ppl tryin to make money cuttin lawns pull lawn mowers on the back of a bike..
E-Makulate Metaphorz
" Ya'll Can't Stop Tha Movement!! "
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Re: MenaCe vs -.HaZarD.-
Your Bars Are Dumb'd Down..Mine Are Up Ina Intelligent Brain
Dude's Racing Haz? "Men..A..See (E) Like Spellin His Name!
You Down With Law? I'ma Cop Killah What Are Those Suppose 2 Be Hotfillaz?
i'd Get 25 For THis So i'm Quick Ta Give U Tha "Quarta Pound" Like a POT DILLA!
This Assholes Dead..He Can't "Run Minds" If They Don't Have No Legs
So i'm Aimin At Cav's Like A Big Fan..U a Silly Kid Damn!
Sendin Shots That Aint "Touch Nobody" Cus i Was The DIG MAN!
I Ended My Apprenitice In a Shot..Like Packagin a Star War Figure i Put MENICE IN A BOX!!
Dude's Racing Haz? "Men..A..See (E) Like Spellin His Name!
You Down With Law? I'ma Cop Killah What Are Those Suppose 2 Be Hotfillaz?
i'd Get 25 For THis So i'm Quick Ta Give U Tha "Quarta Pound" Like a POT DILLA!
This Assholes Dead..He Can't "Run Minds" If They Don't Have No Legs
So i'm Aimin At Cav's Like A Big Fan..U a Silly Kid Damn!
Sendin Shots That Aint "Touch Nobody" Cus i Was The DIG MAN!
I Ended My Apprenitice In a Shot..Like Packagin a Star War Figure i Put MENICE IN A BOX!!
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Re: MenaCe vs -.HaZarD.-
Watch and see how i most properly drop this weak Known Mockery..
Cause logically his drops rot nowadays the way there So Obsolete!!..***
[why did you need to tell us what obsolete meant? Were not retarded, lmao. All jokes aside this was a meh bar, flow made it seem like you were gunna come sick but u kinda held off...6/10]
I see ya pushin 50 so this means that hill ya gettin Thrown Over..
And for Full Closure imma drag you all around like they Tow Mowers!!..***
[Decent bar here, flow was on point, structure was good. I liked it...The mull mowers expo is kinda pushin it though...7/10]
It didn't take plenty barz to leave heavy scars on your Frail Surface..
My Punches Impale Perfect while Haz drops sound like never heard sunny and Cher Verses!!..
[lmao...Pretty bar here, had the flow, even some multies to help eevrything string together. I liked this, your best bar in this verse...8/10]
For years you Stood UnNoticed finally got a grip and Couldn't Hold It Since Put in Motion..
Reconize the only time you'll get it "hands down" is on your casket when i Push to Close It!!..
[Alright, you had a choppy flow in the setup then threw off your structure to pull off a punch that wasn't all that devastating. Wrong choice of closer. You want the more personal thing to be the last memory the voter has of your verse, not a metaphor you could use on anyone...6/10]
TOTAL:::: You came alright, like always you brought a cool flow to the table, but you were inconsistent in this battle compared to your last...A little dissapointed...The Sunny and Cher line was fresh though...27/40
Your Bars Are Dumb'd Down..Mine Are Up Ina Intelligent Brain
Dude's Racing Haz? "Men..A..See (E) Like Spellin His Name!
[I think your trying to hard to get this one to go man, not feeling the opener at all...6/10]
You Down With Law? I'ma Cop Killah What Are Those Suppose 2 Be Hotfillaz?
i'd Get 25 For THis So i'm Quick Ta Give U Tha "Quarta Pound" Like a POT DILLA!
[Meh, not really that hard hitting, I've heard quarter pound/pounder disses and relations to weed before...6.5/10]
This Assholes Dead..He Can't "Run Minds" If They Don't Have No Legs
So i'm Aimin At Cav's Like A Big Fan..U a Silly Kid Damn!
Sendin Shots That Aint "Touch Nobody" Cus i Was The DIG MAN!
[Decent hit at the end, ive actually used a "clapp at your cavs like a clevland fan" line before, kinda brings it down for me in that sense...7/10]
I Ended My Apprenitice In a Shot..Like Packagin a Star War Figure i Put MENICE IN A BOX!!
[Your best bar, or line...lol...Came up decent, 8/10]
TOTAL::: Just seemed like you didn't respect this person enough to try...27.5/40
VoTe::: Well this was a close battle because of a few reasons. ONE BIG ONE is that Hazard didn't come hard at all, which gives me the suspicion that he figured he would walk away with victory no matter what the case. ANOTHER reason is that it looks like the pressure got to Menace, because he usually comes way sicker but he fell short of his usual expectations as well. So, I think if Menace would of came at his normal pace, he could of caught Haz sleeping on him and snuck away with a good W. BUT he didn't capitalize on the opportunity he had, and Haz's lackluster verse brought him ahead by just a hair...LITERALLY...A FUCKING FRACTION. It's really hard to say anyone one here though, I really want to say tie...But I can't do that, not if someone won by the points, so I give this vote to Haz...
RETURN THE FAVOR IN MY BATTLE WITH M.O.E
Cause logically his drops rot nowadays the way there So Obsolete!!..***
[why did you need to tell us what obsolete meant? Were not retarded, lmao. All jokes aside this was a meh bar, flow made it seem like you were gunna come sick but u kinda held off...6/10]
I see ya pushin 50 so this means that hill ya gettin Thrown Over..
And for Full Closure imma drag you all around like they Tow Mowers!!..***
[Decent bar here, flow was on point, structure was good. I liked it...The mull mowers expo is kinda pushin it though...7/10]
It didn't take plenty barz to leave heavy scars on your Frail Surface..
My Punches Impale Perfect while Haz drops sound like never heard sunny and Cher Verses!!..
[lmao...Pretty bar here, had the flow, even some multies to help eevrything string together. I liked this, your best bar in this verse...8/10]
For years you Stood UnNoticed finally got a grip and Couldn't Hold It Since Put in Motion..
Reconize the only time you'll get it "hands down" is on your casket when i Push to Close It!!..
[Alright, you had a choppy flow in the setup then threw off your structure to pull off a punch that wasn't all that devastating. Wrong choice of closer. You want the more personal thing to be the last memory the voter has of your verse, not a metaphor you could use on anyone...6/10]
TOTAL:::: You came alright, like always you brought a cool flow to the table, but you were inconsistent in this battle compared to your last...A little dissapointed...The Sunny and Cher line was fresh though...27/40
Your Bars Are Dumb'd Down..Mine Are Up Ina Intelligent Brain
Dude's Racing Haz? "Men..A..See (E) Like Spellin His Name!
[I think your trying to hard to get this one to go man, not feeling the opener at all...6/10]
You Down With Law? I'ma Cop Killah What Are Those Suppose 2 Be Hotfillaz?
i'd Get 25 For THis So i'm Quick Ta Give U Tha "Quarta Pound" Like a POT DILLA!
[Meh, not really that hard hitting, I've heard quarter pound/pounder disses and relations to weed before...6.5/10]
This Assholes Dead..He Can't "Run Minds" If They Don't Have No Legs
So i'm Aimin At Cav's Like A Big Fan..U a Silly Kid Damn!
Sendin Shots That Aint "Touch Nobody" Cus i Was The DIG MAN!
[Decent hit at the end, ive actually used a "clapp at your cavs like a clevland fan" line before, kinda brings it down for me in that sense...7/10]
I Ended My Apprenitice In a Shot..Like Packagin a Star War Figure i Put MENICE IN A BOX!!
[Your best bar, or line...lol...Came up decent, 8/10]
TOTAL::: Just seemed like you didn't respect this person enough to try...27.5/40
VoTe::: Well this was a close battle because of a few reasons. ONE BIG ONE is that Hazard didn't come hard at all, which gives me the suspicion that he figured he would walk away with victory no matter what the case. ANOTHER reason is that it looks like the pressure got to Menace, because he usually comes way sicker but he fell short of his usual expectations as well. So, I think if Menace would of came at his normal pace, he could of caught Haz sleeping on him and snuck away with a good W. BUT he didn't capitalize on the opportunity he had, and Haz's lackluster verse brought him ahead by just a hair...LITERALLY...A FUCKING FRACTION. It's really hard to say anyone one here though, I really want to say tie...But I can't do that, not if someone won by the points, so I give this vote to Haz...
RETURN THE FAVOR IN MY BATTLE WITH M.O.E
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Re: MenaCe vs -.HaZarD.-
RETURN THE FAVOR IN MY BATTLE WITH M.O.E
ok dis is da 2nd time dis is happened but yo lungzz we haven't battled yet!!!! and k killah ive never battled dead silence yet either LMAO!!!! any way cats
opener-menace haz da force on the name killed it for me so menace took it
personals-niether
punchs-Menace had a few more that were solid
flow-tie
multis-haz he had like one more multi that lined up good
word/nameplay-haz had some nameplay plus word play menace didn't really make an attempt with haz's name even tho its all played by now
closer-haz menace you slacked off in this last bar
menace-3
haz-4
very close battle but my vote goes to
hazard
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Re: MenaCe vs -.HaZarD.-
both were weak no lie im not the type to keep breakin down why everytime i vote to make u feel better... but i have to give my vote to menace because at least his punches were better lol hazard didnt come hard at all...
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RETURN THE FAVOR IN MY BATTLE WITH M.O.E
thats gay as fuck my dude dont be dick riding on this sh1t dog vote it up right aight the same to everyone im new and it aint fair to all the other new battlers either.KEEP THE FAVORTIZIM TO YOURSELVS..... B.E.Z
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RETURN THE FAVOR IN MY BATTLE WITH M.O.E
thats gay as fuck my dude dont be dick riding on this sh1t dog vote it up right aight the same to everyone im new and it aint fair to all the other new battlers either.KEEP THE FAVORTIZIM TO YOURSELVS..... B.E.Z
"wHO THE hELL DO yOU THInK yOU ARE, jESUS mUTHA FuCKA????"
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Re: MenaCe vs -.HaZarD.-
i'mma give this to menace his wordplay was more simple but haz wordplay was forced and some of the wording was awkward seemed like he half assed it too much
on the real though both verses were weak, menace's lacked hard hitting punches and haz wordplay wasn't on point
on the real though both verses were weak, menace's lacked hard hitting punches and haz wordplay wasn't on point
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Re: MenaCe vs -.HaZarD.-
Watch and see how i most properly drop this weak Known Mockery..
Cause logically his drops rot nowadays the way there So Obsolete!!..***
ill Flow, punch so so... 7/10
I see ya pushin 50 so this means that hill ya gettin Thrown Over..
And for Full Closure imma drag you all around like they Tow Mowers!!..***
Meh not feeling this 6/10
It didn't take plenty barz to leave heavy scars on your Frail Surface..
My Punches Impale Perfect while Haz drops sound like never heard sunny and Cher Verses!!..
lol Funny shit here...7/10
For years you Stood UnNoticed finally got a grip and Couldn't Hold It Since Put in Motion..
Reconize the only time you'll get it "hands down" is on your casket when i Push to Close It!!..
ouch, Liked that there 8/10
Your Bars Are Dumb'd Down..Mine Are Up Ina Intelligent Brain
Dude's Racing Haz? "Men..A..See (E) Like Spellin His Name!
punch was off...nice vocab! 6/10
You Down With Law? I'ma Cop Killah What Are Those Suppose 2 Be Hotfillaz?
i'd Get 25 For THis So i'm Quick Ta Give U Tha "Quarta Pound" Like a POT DILLA!
Nice, 8/10
This Assholes Dead..He Can't "Run Minds" If They Don't Have No Legs
So i'm Aimin At Cav's Like A Big Fan..U a Silly Kid Damn!
hmmm, Not good! 3/10
Sendin Shots That Aint "Touch Nobody" Cus i Was The DIG MAN!
I Ended My Apprenitice In a Shot..Like Packagin a Star War Figure i Put MENICE IN A BOX!!
Meh, predicable 7/10
winner
MENACE!
Cause logically his drops rot nowadays the way there So Obsolete!!..***
ill Flow, punch so so... 7/10
I see ya pushin 50 so this means that hill ya gettin Thrown Over..
And for Full Closure imma drag you all around like they Tow Mowers!!..***
Meh not feeling this 6/10
It didn't take plenty barz to leave heavy scars on your Frail Surface..
My Punches Impale Perfect while Haz drops sound like never heard sunny and Cher Verses!!..
lol Funny shit here...7/10
For years you Stood UnNoticed finally got a grip and Couldn't Hold It Since Put in Motion..
Reconize the only time you'll get it "hands down" is on your casket when i Push to Close It!!..
ouch, Liked that there 8/10
Your Bars Are Dumb'd Down..Mine Are Up Ina Intelligent Brain
Dude's Racing Haz? "Men..A..See (E) Like Spellin His Name!
punch was off...nice vocab! 6/10
You Down With Law? I'ma Cop Killah What Are Those Suppose 2 Be Hotfillaz?
i'd Get 25 For THis So i'm Quick Ta Give U Tha "Quarta Pound" Like a POT DILLA!
Nice, 8/10
This Assholes Dead..He Can't "Run Minds" If They Don't Have No Legs
So i'm Aimin At Cav's Like A Big Fan..U a Silly Kid Damn!
hmmm, Not good! 3/10
Sendin Shots That Aint "Touch Nobody" Cus i Was The DIG MAN!
I Ended My Apprenitice In a Shot..Like Packagin a Star War Figure i Put MENICE IN A BOX!!
Meh, predicable 7/10
winner
MENACE!
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Re: MenaCe vs -.HaZarD.-
How it is done.
Learn the rules please.
-First to 5 votes wins, 3-0=K.O. (4-1=T.K.O.)
Learn the rules please.
-First to 5 votes wins, 3-0=K.O. (4-1=T.K.O.)
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Re: MenaCe vs -.HaZarD.-
Voting stands at 3-2 in Menace's favor. This battles been open for too long as it is. Whoever has the most votes, unless someone gets too 5, by Saturday at noon EST wins this battle.
GET TO VOTING!
GET TO VOTING!
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Re: MenaCe vs -.HaZarD.-
Alpha Bill wrote:Voting stands at 3-2 in Menace's favor. This battles been open for too long as it is. Whoever has the most votes, unless someone gets too 5, by Saturday at noon EST wins this battle.
GET TO VOTING!
Way Past Noon....
Menace wins by Most Votes..3-2
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