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What I'm Born To Do

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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/been- ... ml#p123743

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/don-t ... ml#p123741

This is a joint a did about a month ago and It's goin on my new mixtape "R.E.A.L." thats about to drop in one or two weeks...

It's the first song so just lemme know what you think good or bad it's all appreciated

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Post by -MenaCe- »

This wasn't bad man.

Tha production was tight, beat was nice, and ya delivery was overall consistant. So i think it was a good drop. Keep Em Comin!




Return the favor and leave feed on my drops:


http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/some-ish-vt13682.html


http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/some-ish-vt13682.html


http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/frees ... 13850.html


http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/some- ... 13718.html


http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/frees ... 13684.html


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Beats on that mellow tip, original? if so nice... i like it..

production sounds pretty good from the get catchy hook..

lyrically your styles pretty nice dude.presence aight.

you sound ALOT like Kanye to be honest.even the recording style i can hear you taking your breaths between lines...well I'm sure you hear that already so all in all I'd say this was some nice shit and since it looks on your myspacelike your doing real shows Props man..1
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Def been doin a lot of shows latley tryna get a lil buzz started... Thanks for all the positive feed I appreciate it

And as far as the beat it's a mainstream beat.. Some lame song "follow me on twitter" haha I never listened to it cuzz I found the beat first and fell in love with it haha

But again good looks I'll return the favor asap I'm just posting from my blackberry right now

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Def been doin a lot of shows latley tryna get a lil buzz started... Thanks for all the positive feed I appreciate it

And as far as the beat it's a mainstream beat.. Some lame song "follow me on twitter" haha I never listened to it cuzz I found the beat first and fell in love with it haha

But again good looks I'll return the favor asap I'm just posting from my blackberry right now
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this song was pretty tight... like Tre said i can hear the Kanye influence in ya voice... hook was pretty dope... lyrics were cool too man... keep doin u man... give it a 8/10... keep droppin homie!!!! peace
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Post by Viral »

good shit man...good to see another audio artist doin his thang come to illest also...ur qualitys dope, flow was on point, lyrics r nice..really not much else to say...lol...keep doin u
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Post by P.T.R-ins »

agreed with viral/...quality dope..i even dont like slow mod(tho i do it also)....didnt lisend all tracks but i will ....things i heard is really good...wish you all best incoming wit your mixtape.peace
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Thanks so much for the positive feed!

Also man any of yall have beat/collab Ideas for audio I am def down!
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Post by Kurse »

Very nice tracks...I actually liked a few of them. I stayed on your page for a couple of minutes rifling thru 'em! One of your lines actually had me rollin, something along the lines of...

..."only KIX (kicks) you get are mother approved"

...haha, that shit goes hard kid, I'm feelin that. Coming from Chicago, I can hear alot of that Kanye West influence and overtone in your presentations, which is pretty wild coming from a white kat...but I like that. Good joints homie...keep doing you and gettin your buzz on! If you get a chance...peep my last joint...

...it's called "Desperado"


http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/despe ... 13749.html
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Kurse wrote:
...haha, that shit goes hard kid, I'm feelin that. Coming from Chicago, I can hear alot of that Kanye West influence and overtone in your presentations, which is pretty wild coming from a white kat...but I like that. Good joints homie...keep doing you and gettin your buzz on! If you get a chance...peep my last joint...

...it's called "Desperado"


http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/despe ... 13749.html

No Doubt homie thanks a lot
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