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Cee4
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Random Scripture Title 2

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Leave a link to verse or a battle and I’ll return the favour


It Mr Cee dead people, fuck the sixth sense kid
My sixth sense sick, I make the slick tense quick
Their defence shit, if your equal then come stop me
But im so tough id beat the sequels outtta Rocky
Lyrics evil n im cocky, my raps make OCD realer
I provide the killer blow like im ODB`s dealer
U need to see a healer, I don’t give 2 fucks..I aint a DP chick
The only scratches you cause make ya CD skip
On some ET shit, im on a higher cycle, hand me a pass
U aint marking livestock so why u branded an ass?
Im Midas with jabs, get under ya skin like Lyme disease
Sublime with frees, bitch u need a pill to rhyme with ease
Now its time to freeze, im so cold and relevant
A north pole resident, top of the globe and president
I set the precedent, thats my role in this life
When it comes to pussy im in more holes than midwifes
They fold like Swiss knifes, im dismissing their joints
They try to rap circles but their missing the point
Fuckin wannabe Shadys…these hoes are wack stans
Bunch of Miguel Cottos…they aint close to Pac man
They chose to rap Damn! they only fit with epilepsy
Im sonnin everyone, and I spit like heaven sent me
But that shit don’t even tempt me
My squads where my faith exist
But if im dead wrong, id be a gods favourite atheist
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U need to see a healer, I don’t give 2 fucks..I aint a DP chick
The only scratches you cause make ya CD skip
^^^^^HAHAHAHA That was smooth dawg

I like this flow was on point for the most part
I enjoyed it keep writing
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Dude, every one of your punchlines would have gotten an "Oh shit," from a crowd. Just don't turn into Copywrite. You can definitely battle, but if that's all you can do, it would wreck your chances to get versatile. Still ridiculously fucking dope.
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Im Midas with jabs, get under ya skin like Lyme disease
Sublime with frees, bitch u need a pill to rhyme with ease
Now its time to freeze,
That's So True!! Most of These Emcees Needa Drug To Spit, I Used Ta Be Like That. Now I'm Way Better Without The Stuff. Good Shit Cee, Keep Droppin'!!
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Post by Shady_08 »

nice piece man... nice flow liked it


best bar right here...
Im Midas with jabs, get under ya skin like Lyme disease
Sublime with frees, bitch u need a pill to rhyme with ease
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Post by complexity »

Cee4 wrote:Leave a link to verse or a battle and I’ll return the favour


It Mr Cee dead people, fuck the sixth sense kid
My sixth sense sick, I make the slick tense quick
Their defence shit, if your equal then come stop me
But im so tough id beat the sequels outtta Rocky

Not a bad punch at all.

Lyrics evil n im cocky, my raps make OCD realer
I provide the killer blow like im ODB`s dealer
U need to see a healer, I don’t give 2 fucks..I aint a DP chick
The only scratches you cause make ya CD skip

Alright.

On some ET shit, im on a higher cycle, hand me a pass
U aint marking livestock so why u branded an ass?

Nice play on words.

Im Midas with jabs, get under ya skin like Lyme disease
Sublime with frees, bitch u need a pill to rhyme with ease
Now its time to freeze, im so cold and relevant
A north pole resident, top of the globe and president

Nice rhyming. I think you could have made a slightly more important point, but I like that.

I set the precedent, thats my role in this life
When it comes to pussy im in more holes than midwifes
They fold like Swiss knifes, im dismissing their joints
They try to rap circles but their missing the point

Good punch.

Fuckin wannabe Shadys…these hoes are wack stans
Bunch of Miguel Cottos…they aint close to Pac man
They chose to rap Damn! they only fit with epilepsy
Im sonnin everyone, and I spit like heaven sent me
But that shit don’t even tempt me
My squads where my faith exist
But if im dead wrong, id be a gods favourite atheist
Nice ending bar.

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I wanted to leave feedback on this for a couple days. I do recall number one being a bit more consistent. It's always exciting to see a scripture from Cee4 though!
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