MenaCe vs Novel(MenaCe wins by KO)

[-MenaCe-]

5 Bars..
House Rules:
Due:A.S.A.P







Check!

[NoVeL]

I Got This 1 Look...

You On-line? Then Order n Get Served
Like Kids With Happy Meals
Look At The Crap You Spill
My Flow Carry Mc Donald Logo's
Reason Bein You 1 of A Billion Served!
Your As Lame As Your Text-is (Texas)
You Post Rhymes
Like Mexicans With Wanted Signs
Tryna Cross Mics
Iz Like Essay Types Going Over Tha Border Lines. (Margin)
My Lyrics Iz Killa Cuz
I Went To The School Of Colombine
I Jott With Panic Attacks
You Panic With Raps
There's A Difference, I Know That I'll be Fine
MenaCe v.s. NoVeL or NoVeL v.s. MenaCe
When My Punchlines Drop
Its Shocks Leaving You Stunned
Simply I've Won
By The Knockout Finish
Leavin'A Trip 2 The Mouth Doctor Named Dennis(Dentist)
Finished? Nah..
I Don't Need 2 Kill You By Split'n Ya Wig
My Scripts Bury, You Digg
My Writtens Bust A Hole In Ya Lip
& Verses Would Knock Off Ya Fitted
NoVeL High N Sick
Prescribed Off Tha Highest Shit
N 2 !ll Aint A Bad Description
MenaCe A MenaCe 2 The Rap Society
I'll Kill Him Off Quietly
Slit'N His Throat N
Leavin' His Raps 2 Spit In A Sick Condition

-NoVeL

-- Sat Dec 05, 2009 11:24 am --

Uppin Feed, Votes Please

[-MenaCe-]

This Nigga doesn't throw punches just Alotta Hooks..
Fuck a Novel!! His skills are more like a Pocket Book!!
Beat Me? Not a Chance Fool Your ring of fire Id Dance Thru..
Don't Believe He's a Handfull.. ive seen better verses from V.C Andrews!!
You drop trash on the regular ive never seen Sumthin Nice From Ya..
plus the only time you got it "Covered" is Wen ya under Tight Covers!!..
Someone Warn This Child..that I'll Rip his current and his Former Style..
He could try his best to "get over" on me but'll end up like Gomer Pyle!!..
You aint seen a glance of me pissed you aint a Man You Ah Bitch..
Like Luniz i got 5 on it and your relize i'll Hand You Ya Fifth!!..(5th Loss Nigga!)




Votes!

[Riggz]

vote = Menace (but you damn near d/q since you said "asap" in the call out and posted 3 days later)!

But i will say the very first line with the punches/hooks won it. Very nice

I will also say, I have a lot of respect for Novel for dropping promptly with a tru key. 3 days later is a questionable key, Men-.

Holla

[-MenaCe-]

1-0 Me...Uppin Votes!


@ Riggz that was a key i was just bein lazy..I dropped this today right after i dropped my verse against you..Thnx for the vote

[The Gonz]

Man, I wish I could break this down but its a total cat sweep. Novel, yer structure was straight ass. You had some really weak punches and I don't care how you break those bars down, there's more than 5. Menace, dude I gotta give you props for fixin them long ass bars finally lol. For real, the flow on this joint was much much much better than any other battle verse I've seen you drop.

But back to the battle. Like I said, its a category sweep without a doubt. Novel, you need to step yer game up man. But at least you're in here doing yer thing and making an effort.

vote: Menace.

[-MenaCe-]

2-0 Me Uppin!

[P.T.R-ins]

how many lines are there at Novel scripts...i cant get it plus plenty things dont even rhymes
some does,but just to few to be called lines or bars

and it was totally whack comparing to Menaces verse(tho i saw much better from him) ..
i think i said enough and that every one will agree wit me

vote goes to Menace

p.s..Novel man just put lil more effort in creatin structure of your things(no disrespecting)

[-MenaCe-]

3-0 Menace wins by KO..





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