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I Hope Your Hearin' This

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This track is dedicated to my boy who passed when i was 15, RIP Johnny...hope yall enjoy this


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Similiar to the song you wrote for Megan way back when, your strongest tracks are the ones that came truely from your heart. It was refreshing to not only hear you do a track on your own again...but another track that carried so much emotion. The beat fit the concept perfectly, the choice of words in desciption drew alot of pictures...just overall another great joint that displays the talent you have. Keep working on these tracks and use this feedback as momentum to carry you through the next project.

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Re: I Hope Your Hearin' This

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Lotta shit I liked about this joint Viral -

Hook was ideal and flowed excellent
Verses drew imagery... real heart felt man
You could hear the tears in the beat

Shit was professional. Way ta bring it home for ya boy.
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Re: I Hope Your Hearin' This

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much appreciated on the feed guys
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Yo this was mad nice. Beat was perfect. The delivery was perfect, lotta emotion spilled. Lyrics were nice. I'm very impressed, this shit turned out great!
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Re: I Hope Your Hearin' This

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good shit man... seriously... heard the emotions fam... kinda hard to ignore cause of the subject... love the style u wrote this in man... i dig these kinda tracks tho... its too bad tho that we write the best material after something tragic happens... but wherever he is i'm sure hes listenin and bobbin his head to it... good shit Viral...

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yo i give you a lot of respect man i find it extremely hard to a song like becuz its so hard to everything the way you want you, you executed very well nice presence lyrics flow everything man, emotion is dope good shit man keep droppin and sorry bout your loss
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Re: I Hope Your Hearin' This

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thank you to those that left feed, i havent been home for like 3 or 4 days so i havent been able to get on....ill def be leavin u guys feed asap once i get back to the pad....
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Post by TreTru »

HaHa this beat is niice..nice intro..beats actually got pretty cool tempo for this type of track..good shyt..

flo's on point, qualities nice..

Real Nice i like the hook ...good emotion throughout..
I like these kinda Tru type songs..

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Re: I Hope Your Hearin' This

Post by P.T.R-ins »

well this is the excellent way to pay respect to someone...really good track..all i can add that am feelin it V.
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Re: I Hope Your Hearin' This

Post by -MenaCe- »

Nice Track Viral thats ill that its decicated to your boy and you can definitly hear the emotion. im feelin this..good shit V
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