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Bonnie at 5

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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k4p4Mkde-SY[/video]

She's loving my tour bus, yeah she's loving my tour bus

She's on the shore but never assured

and congratulations on graduation

my love say doctor, a gradual patient

could always leave me but never does

could never see me, although she'd come

blue is her face, and I'm standing adjacent from my friend Jason

contemplating on her complacent, conversations on how she made it

Here's the bomb but can I make it?

I'm gonna see like eyes and faces

publicly I cannot change it

Grow in peace elevate with shape-shift

The time it takes won't be mistaken

The hurt it brings, hearts would be broken

bones piercing skin, thought I was joking

scream your pain, steam released from smoking

car door slams, car started

highway speed, hot pursuit, cops in drops watchin' you

got a clue so they stop to shoot

Law provoked for promotion, and all you needed was focus

stand next to me, till we are motioned

don't break a sweat, and I swear I won't tell

if we both go to jail, in that cold cell

I want you to feel my devotion
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lol Thats a Good Student ..
Novel .. str8 up you Came far . Most Improved Hands Down.

Elevate with shapeshift
The time it takes
wont be mistaken
The hurt it brings
hearts wud be breaken or broken
like bones piercin skin
you thought I was jokin
scream your pain
steam released from smokin

Kept this real smooth.

first line was nasty homie. i just like How it Sounds "Elevate With Shape Shift" .. Flow is On Point, u going in With rhyme Schemes multis on point, Just Needa Tighten Content Stay a Bit More On Topic n u set.

Good Shit Keep Dropping
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Thanks HaZ
Thanks T.O.Y.H
Uppin
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