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this originally was my battle verse against him but he no showed..so im hoping to atleast get some feedback and tell me if u like it. much appreciated
I heard menace up there in rankings? Probly cuz he cant face vets...
So fuck buying cards!...My punches'll leave this Ace Decked..!!
So u a entertainer, and a dope lyricist? well not ur rhymin…
Cuz only time he in the Spot Lights….when cops come find him..!!
Do not remind him, he sucks srry just had to mention it foo..
Menace how u turning heads…when ur signature gets more attention then you…!! *big ass sig lol*
U straight fagget! Probly dickride urself…so this is a must win…
Cuz its obvious no one here likes you…and ur the only one who Loves Men…!!
Last bar of death! You'd get laid to rest if you would ride…
So yall gon' witness ME die…like committing suicide…!!! *ME(nace)*
Your Okay....Im A Beast.
Yomommaspimp wrote:Dosia wins everything...there's a video on youtube where chuck norris attempts to roundhouse kick youngdosia...sadly chuck is in the hospital with a broken leg.
I heard menace up there in rankings? Probly cuz he cant face vets...
So fuck buying cards!...My punches'll leave this Ace Decked..!!
I liked this line for some reason, and cant figure out why...lol Nice
So u a entertainer, and a dope lyricist? well not ur rhymin…
Cuz only time he in the Spot Lights….when cops come find him..!!
Nope, Not Good Dude!
Do not remind him, he sucks srry just had to mention it foo..
Menace how u turning heads…when ur signature gets more attention then you…!! *big ass sig lol*
LMFAO yup nice personal
U straight fagget! Probly dickride urself…so this is a must win…
Cuz its obvious no one here likes you…and ur the only one who Loves Men…!!
Clowning em huh? i liked this! Not the hardest but Funny as hell!
Last bar of death! You'd get laid to rest if you would ride…
So yall gon' witness ME die…like committing suicide…!!! *ME(nace)*
Best bar!
All in all It would have been a tight battle prolly...Menace has the ability tah come Real nice wid it!
Thanks fam...yeah i seen menace's shit thats why i wanted him to drop. but thanks for the feed appreciate it
Your Okay....Im A Beast.
Yomommaspimp wrote:Dosia wins everything...there's a video on youtube where chuck norris attempts to roundhouse kick youngdosia...sadly chuck is in the hospital with a broken leg.
I heard menace up there in rankings? Probly cuz he cant face vets...
So fuck buying cards!...My punches'll leave this Ace Decked..!!
Wheres the creativity At? a Card concept...first line was sloppy To Me 2.
So u a entertainer, and a dope lyricist? well not ur rhymin…
Cuz only time he in the Spot Lights….when cops come find him..!!
This was Cool.
Do not remind him, he sucks srry just had to mention it foo..
Menace how u turning heads…when ur signature gets more attention then you…!! *big ass sig lol*
Lmfao, funny shit
U straight fagget! Probly dickride urself…so this is a must win…
Cuz its obvious no one here likes you…and ur the only one who Loves Men…!!
Garbage.
Last bar of death! You'd get laid to rest if you would ride…
So yall gon' witness ME die…like committing suicide…!!! *ME(nace)*
Yomommaspimp wrote:Dosia wins everything...there's a video on youtube where chuck norris attempts to roundhouse kick youngdosia...sadly chuck is in the hospital with a broken leg.
