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Thats Right - Keystyle

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DZXDJf2UpcI

Right
You Ghettoer Than Ghetto Well I Jus Call You Mental
Claimin That You Grip The Wood But You No Japedo
I'm Rockin Out With All The Riffs It's Like You Gotta Settle
Cus It's Aluminium Not No With Heavy Metal
Mayne I Am No Rebel And I Never Really Been That Dope
Let Me Show You The View Like A TV Remote
Look Up In The Sky See Me As God But You Can't Cope
If You Wanna Hang With Me Get A Better Rope
Cus I Spit Flames With Lyrics Smoke That Makes You Choke
But The Flow Is Smooth As A River You Better Bring A Boat
Mayne You Never Know If Shit Gets Through Later
We Know it Came From This Nappy Headed Noob Hater
Mayne Maybe A New Faker Pickin Up Old Traits
Cus They Lyrics Covered In Rust Like Cold Gates
Hater Get Out Of Here, Like A Nun You Got Habits
Too Steep You Head Over Heels Like A Shot Rabbit
Ready For Satisfaction Man Better Pick A Faction
My Lyrics Like Battleships Stripped For Action
Mayne I'm Gettin Atchu I'm Gonna Grab You
My Lyrics Timeless Name Them The Statue
I'm At You One Day Thats Cus Ya Rhymes Is Bleak
I Have To Rename Me Sunday Cus I'm Ending These Weaks
Mayne You Full Of Shit None Of You Cool
Call Me The Theif I Steal Off On These Fools
Cant Teach Me Nothin You Pickin Alot
U Could Boil Saliva Still Couldn't Be Spittin Hot
Didnt Rhyme Why Is You Crossin Me
Claim You Hate Fakes Look Into Hypocrisy
Jockin Me Nah Probably You Duck G
Is My Ass Out Then Stop Tryin To Fuck Me
Rippin me Off If I did That How Would You Feel
No Cheat I Role Fair Like Them Ferris Wheels
See The Stature Of Me Well You Dont Rap
You Spit With Silent C's Means You Throw Crap
Mayne Know This About Me In Ya Throwback
My Crew Like Colgate They Bringin No Slack
Throwdest In The Game Who Got The Best Flow
You Gonna See A Draw Photoshop Dress Codes
Bout To Get Flattened Mayne Better Rap Quick
My Flow Like A Bad Cough You Know That That's Sick
Claimin That You Great We Like You Can Not Spit
Think You Fly, About As Fly As An Ostrich
Where Are The Real Rappers Asleep On The Back Couch
If I Get Any Sicker I'll Probably Pass Out
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Last edited by - Mutual - on Tue Jan 12, 2010 3:30 am, edited 1 time in total.
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Re: Thats Right - Keystyle

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Nice drop homie not a bad drop thought it was good but I've seen better 4rm u. U did drop some dope stuff tho that stood out 2 me.


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Mayne I Am No Rebel And I Never Really Been That Dope
Let Me Show You The View Like A TV Remote
Look Up In The Sky See Me As God But You Can't Cope
If You Wanna Hang With Me Get A Better Rope
Cus I Spit Flames With Lyrics Smoke That Makes You Choke
But The Flow Is Smooth As A River You Better Bring A Boat


Hater Get Out Of Here, Like A Nun You Got Habits
Too Steep You Head Over Heels Like A Shot Rabbit
Ready For Satisfaction Man Better Pick A Faction
My Lyrics Like Battleships Stripped For Action


Cant Teach Me Nothin You Pickin Alot
U Could Boil Saliva Still Couldn't Be Spittin Hot
Didnt Rhyme Why Is You Crossin Me
Claim You Hate Fakes Look Into Hypocrisy

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Thanks for the feed TOYH & HKX as far as the flow goes it may be clearer when it gets on audio
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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- Mutual - wrote:Thanks for the feed TOYH & HKX as far as the flow goes it may be clearer when it gets on audio
yea if you put that on audio it will probley sound alot better cuz then we can tell what you wanted emphasized, good drop tho.
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Nice Keystyle man.
I am sure it will come thru for ya on audio.
was a good drop
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aiight thanks for feed i will be droppin the audio on saturday
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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Post by P.T.R-ins »

what or who is Mayne?and Japedo?:D

tho i liked rhymin sheme in this:D

it was intrestin read just i have ish about who Mayne is lol
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Mayne Is Just Man Spelt Differently lol Japedo Is Pinnochio's Maker Or Some Such Shit

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The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

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