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Re: TOYH Vs 360 Cypher Battle

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360 I commend you on effort, but you have much work 2 do real talk. Your bars, punches, multies n wordplay needed work. It was funny though cuz most of the shit said made me laugh hysterically like (Yo, save that tough talk, I'm not a yungin' I'm a fuckin' older dude.. You're so short you're like a pile of dog shit and I'm steppin' over you!!) by far that was your best bar n it could have been worded better..however it was a CatSweep!!

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Well put it this way.. the way I see it, the best I could do is tie in this battle.. It's whatever. I take losses with a grain of salt..
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Re: TOYH Vs 360 Cypher Battle

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i cosign with Thought!!

TOYH just out shined yah on punches flow, and content!!



Nice lil cypher tho fellaz...i enjoyed the read. But if i had to "vote" for one it would be TOYH


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Re: TOYH Vs 360 Cypher Battle

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Listen Kid i Know Ya Slow So Let Me Dumb it Down Prick..
Tha Nine'll Spit Rounds An You'll Be Doin More Than 360s Before Tha Grounds Hit..

Nice Personal, didn't hit that hard

I'll bust you, lame and scrap that dumb screw face,
then steal your fuckin' ID, so I can really be " the one you hate "

personal but not good

Best Watch Who Ya Checkin it With While Ya Record is Shit 3 And 6? i'm Smashin This Lame....
Kinda Sad But This Kids Already Accomplished His Name!

lol, Great Personal Punch

Yea, well your name is a fuckin' joke. Don't disappear on me.
You got hate in your name, but you're as happy as a queer on E

LMAO.......LOL...this was just funny as hell.

Man You Wack And Lame Shells'll Crack Ya Frame...
Even if You Turned in Circles You Couldn't Back Ya Name..

If this was a real battle i would of given it to you just on this Line Alone, Ill

Yo, I'll start a fundraiser to get you and your girl money,
cause I bet you're so thin you look like you're from a third world country

Ehhh

You Stuck On Bummy And Lame Jokes But i'll Feed Ya Bitch Pipe 'Til Tha Dame Smokes...
We Could Either Hand This Prick A Dick Or A Mic And it'd Result in Tha Same Choke

LOL, Great wordplay and punch

Man, you act hard like you're poppin' guns and you're deadly.
The only thing you poppin' is those pullstring fuckin' confettis

ehhh again.

i Got infrared Beams That'll Scope On Ya Head...
i'll Beat Ya Ass To A Bloody Pulp 'Til You Thinkin You Loc'n instead...

Ehhh

yea, next you're gonna claim you have a grip, but you push a pinto,
literally, cause the engine don't work and there isn't windows

LOL, made me laugh.

i'll Start Sparkin Tha Hate You Couldn't Be Hot if You Went To Tha Park With Some Mase...
i'll Leave Smashed Quicker Than Car Accidents With Scars On Ya Face

pretty good

Yo, I'll bust this fake bitch with his gun talk and gay switch.
he's only mad and got hate is in name cause he's sexually frustrated

ehhh

Man You're Like Weak Trees Ya Flow i'm Just Baggin it Up....
i Could Easily Smoke You Choose Tha Weapon You Want A Mag Or A Dutch..

ok

Yo, we're miles away, but even from here I can tell your whole style is gay,
but he goes the hardest at his stompin' ground - the gay pride parade

LMAO....ha, nice one

Now You Talkin Stompin Grounds i'll Pop A Round...
Then Bring Ya Back To Maury Cuz That's Where Ya Mom An Pops Was Found..

that was nice...very nice

Yo, save that tough talk. I'm not a yougin'. I"m a fuckin' older dude.
You're so short you're like a pile of dog shit and I'm steppin' over you

pretty good,funny too

i Normally Dont Believe in Killin Kids But Watch Me Abort This Prick...
i'll Dump Slugs in His Stomach 'Til His Torso Kicks!

nice

You little fuckin' worm. you were concieved from the dumbest sperm..
ah fuck it.. gimme a shovel. I'll bury 'im under dirt

ehhhh

I woulda givin it to TOYH in a battle...........360 you a funny as nigga though.
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Re: TOYH Vs 360 Cypher Battle

Post by Riggz »

I like this live chat box battling... reminds me of street corner battles (or at least this one reminded me of that dumb show by Nick Cannon).. anywayz..Toyh was doing some real battlin' shit... 360 i've grown to like your humerous personals but they can work against you sometimes when the personal may or maynot be true.. like the pinto line may have drawn crickets (as well as the confetti and the bury'em under dirt line), where as most of TOYH's lines were like oooooh, daaaamn, "aaaah he got'em on that one" (ie, 3&6 line, same choke line, etc)..
Good shit guys. TOYH gets my vote.

When is that live chat battle going to take place? That will be cool too.
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Re: TOYH Vs 360 Cypher Battle

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this was ill haha ay made punches 4rm both ya'll i like dat back and forth shit dats da way its pose 2 be haha dammit we need 2 get dis live battle thing poppin' if it don't then it's da textcees lost but dis was def ill TOYH did get at 360 pretty good but 360 held his own man dis needs live battle thing is an example of wat it would be and dis is da jump start 2 it
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Re: TOYH Vs 360 Cypher Battle

Post by ~TITAN SPITEFUL~ »

yo this was dope shit if it was off the dome, liked the bar4bar style
yall had some good flow and punches and that choke line from thaoneyouhate had me laughin, good shit homie
360 i felt was more consistent with punches but thaoneyouhate had some better ones, both killed the flow, good shit my niggaz!
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Re: TOYH Vs 360 Cypher Battle

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Thanks to everyone who gave it a look and dropped feedback..
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Re: TOYH Vs 360 Cypher Battle

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Listen Kid i Know Ya Slow So Let Me Dumb it Down Prick..
Tha Nine'll Spit Rounds An You'll Be Doin More Than 360s Before Tha Grounds Hit..

.Vs.


I'll bust you, lame and scrap that dumb screw face,
then steal your fuckin' ID, so I can really be " the one you hate "


TheOne Takes It Lmfao.


Best Watch Who Ya Checkin it With While Ya Record is Shit 3 And 6? i'm Smashin This Lame....
Kinda Sad But This Kids Already Accomplished His Name!

First line kind of jogged To Me, Second Line Smacked Him lmao

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Yea, well your name is a fuckin' joke. Don't disappear on me.
You got hate in your name, but you're as happy as a queer on E

Funny As Fuck. Got To Give This To 360. 1-1



Man You Wack And Lame Shells'll Crack Ya Frame...
Even if You Turned in Circles You Couldn't Back Ya Name..

Vs

Yo, I'll start a fundraiser to get you and your girl money,
cause I bet you're so thin you look like you're from a third world country


TheOne Takes It.


You Stuck On Bummy And Lame Jokes But i'll Feed Ya Bitch Pipe 'Til Tha Dame Smokes...
We Could Either Hand This Prick A Dick Or A Mic And it'd Result in Tha Same Choke

Man, you act hard like you're poppin' guns and you're deadly.
The only thing you poppin' is those pullstring fuckin' confettis

LMAOO ThaOne killed it.


i Got infrared Beams That'll Scope On Ya Head...
i'll Beat Ya Ass To A Bloody Pulp 'Til You Thinkin You Loc'n instead...


yea, next you're gonna claim you have a grip, but you push a pinto,

literally, cause the engine don't work and there isn't windows

lol 360 got it.


i'll Start Sparkin Tha Hate You Couldn't Be Hot if You Went To Tha Park With Some Mase...
i'll Leave Smashed Quicker Than Car Accidents With Scars On Ya Face

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Yo, I'll bust this fake bitch with his gun talk and gay switch.
he's only mad and got hate is in name cause he's sexually frustrated

Gotta Give it To 360, 3-3.

Man You're Like Weak Trees Ya Flow i'm Just Baggin it Up....
i Could Easily Smoke You Choose Tha Weapon You Want A Mag Or A Dutch..

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Yo, we're miles away, but even from here I can tell your whole style is gay,
but he goes the hardest at his stompin' ground - the gay pride parade

Tie.

Now You Talkin Stompin Grounds i'll Pop A Round...
Then Bring Ya Back To Maury Cuz That's Where Ya Mom An Pops Was Found..

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Yo, save that tough talk. I'm not a yougin'. I"m a fuckin' older dude.
You're so short you're like a pile of dog shit and I'm steppin' over you

LMAOOO ThaOne Got That.


i Normally Dont Believe in Killin Kids But Watch Me Abort This Prick...
i'll Dump Slugs in His Stomach 'Til His Torso Kicks!

.Vs.

You little fuckin' worm. you were concieved from the dumbest sperm..
ah fuck it.. gimme a shovel. I'll bury 'im under dirt


ThaOne Took It .. He Came Correct while ya end out flow seem'd drained . In My Opinion .

5/3 - ThaOne.


anyways this Was a Good Battle

ThaOne Gets My Vote For Overall Victory ..
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Re: TOYH Vs 360 Cypher Battle

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This was good shit, consistent with the flow all the way. I think the 1st half was better for punchlines than the second but nothin really went below par. Keep at it I wanna see more from the both of ya.
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Re: TOYH Vs 360 Cypher Battle

Post by P.T.R-ins »

this was funny read... this is some good rhymes fest shit wit some hilarious personals and punches

my faw bar was

You Stuck On Bummy And Lame Jokes But i'll Feed Ya Bitch Pipe 'Til Tha Dame Smokes...
We Could Either Hand This Prick A Dick Or A Mic And it'd Result in Tha Same Choke

LOL

you guys made it worth of readin
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