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They watchin my every move, Viacom too

CBS even Channel 7 Eyewitness news

Entitle my view with every step that I make

Lord guide me as I meditate, and revelate

when will these rappers begin 2 get it straight

heaven made seven days, & it's hard 4 us 2 celebrate

They don't realize what air is with every breath they take

persperation & heavy heartbeats, relocation is destination hardly

where are we going? where are movin 2?

most politics delusional, it'd be a crucial move

if you knew what you would do

where in the world is our women and children too?

Family morals, went out the window since public school

pride set itself in, I think were beautiful

not motion picture rated but I'm comin soon
Last edited by NoVeL on Tue Mar 08, 2011 8:05 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: Killuminati Keystyle

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Not bad for a keystyle.
some nice meta's as well. Keep dropping fam,
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Re: Killuminati Keystyle

Post by complexity »

First half was nice. I liked the rhyme scheme for the most part. I see the Jay Z inspiration.

I'd have to say that my favorite part was these bars:

"Every step I make Lord please guide me as I meditate n when will these rappers begin 2 ever get it straight? If heaven made seven days.. why is it hard 4 us 2 celebrate?"

Not bad at all.
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