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i got no attention span and my patience are shorter/
cross me and ull have more problems then mexicans at the border/
im out of my mind, i need 2 re order/
u would crumple under the weight that he shoulders/
so pay attention to wat he told ya/
u better inform ur parents children/
i will abort, im prepared to kill them/
wit lead i intend to fill them/
so they better run, their pace better hasten, quickn/
or theyll need a relief fund like the hatien victims/
wait leme repeat/
fuck wit me, youll need more help then the hatian police/
i will shake ur base, crumble your foundation/
laughin till my side achin, while u lie waitin/
in a tsunami of blood, starein at me hatein/
but just be patient, soon ur mind will be vacant/
it moved away, its gonna stay away, no vacation/
so when u u meet him, tell jesus get back to work, breaks over/
or tell the devil, enjoy his time left, ill see him when i take over/
but while im here, ima rush to the top like when u shake soda/
my guns sound like claps of lightning/
ur shits sound like keyboard typing/
it turnes me on to see whores fightin/
turn me on more so see them same whore likein/
and lickin eachother, im try smash thats the plan/
cuz them hoes know i tear down walls like the kool-aid man/
no diseases, hot bitches better cool they clam/
cuz i dont fuck with burnin shit like the klu klux klan...



holla back at me, let me know wat u think..
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"or theyll need a relief fund like the hatien victims/
wait leme repeat/
fuck wit me, youll need more help then the hatian police/" -- I liked that part...
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Post by QwarterZ »

I think I liked the other one more
this written had more LoL's in it tho'

I don't know how the beginning came about
but keep doing you man...LoL
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or theyll need a relief fund like the hatien victims/
wait leme repeat/
fuck wit me, youll need more help then the hatian police/

i felt tthat tooo!
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