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A Short Message

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Haven't written in over a year, figured I do something short to help get the blood flowing.

Step to the stage and straight rip jackets
Wrez versus rift rafting mall strip faggots
who climb up ladders with a shortage of pegs
and come with rhymes stiffer than Roosevelt's legs
like Eston Hemings I'm a slave to dead presidents
I hold precedence over all pallid pessimists
to speak strong, with a stride two feet long
and enough words for which to write each song
I'm without flaws man I truly do lack many
rising to the top like kids stack pennies
I'm outstanding like vagrants on Christmas morning
taking pot shots with flat rocks above at all the angels soaring
trying to get free shit from people who don't care
I searched Toronto but couldn't find any mics there
Live by Carpe Diem, at parties fires feel unnerved when I see them
cause I'm surrounded by friends who belong in wax museums
The precision of my flows in terms of tone and diction
is akin to that of the old masters of prose and fiction
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i fucks with it, nice for sumthin short
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Post by Riggz »

I'm diggin' the metaphores and I like when cat's use history similies in their joints. signs of knowledge.

like Eston Hemings I'm a slave to dead presidents
I hold precedence over all pallid pessimists -- nice vocab
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