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The Battles Never Over .. ( Pt 1)

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This Bad Cholesterol If you Take It To Heart
Hazard, I'm Just Playing The Part ..
Why Sweeten Shit Cause u Claim What i'm Saying Ain't Smart?
Tell All These Caged Beasts I'm Already Made In the Ark ..
Please Believe The Battles Never Over ..
Yall Building Beyond The Site While Getting Older,
Yall In a Firm Building,But Can't Dead The Dozer ..
Haz Quick To Piece It Up Like a Writing Legends Folder
I Spit Naked Scripts Not Caring If i'll Regret Exposure.
Lyrical Neen On The Waste It'll Blow Out Loads
I Mean What I Say,U a Median Till That Solid One Comes Out a Mode,
No Life So Trife o u Hold Mics? Don't Get Out Of Code ..
I'm Fisting a Pen, In The Field I'm Tight Forever Missing The End,
If J Ever Get it TwizTid Again
i'll Smoke His Group Home Up Like Passing a Spliff Ta His Friends ..
Why Would The Dude Hype Drugs?? He Culdn't Sit Clean In a Nice Tub,
I Could Give a Fuck Who This Might Rub, Domino Beat Me..
Now He'd Only Give Me a Light Tugg In The Fight Club ..
Who Am I Next To Prison? My Teeth R Fine Don't Test The Wisdom
Ghost Was Never Good Like You Stupid Fucks Need a Exorcism..
This is My Deranged R.I.P in a Well Aranged Script,
Make a Wish N I'm Reshaping It U Insane Bitch..
Sometimes i Don't Feel On The Sane Tip ..
How Is Dude DIVERSE When he Only Demonstrated he Can't Sustain Shit ..
Yeah Rell Beat Me .. Hell Eazy .. Still I Steady Dip With Elevation Till Hell Rell See's Me ..
I Use To Feel I Was Ripping Those Raps Yo,
Tagging My Name In What i Was Spitting At Cat's Yo..
Result i Got Defeated By Mr N Mrs FiaSco..
Alot Of Drama Got Canned I Still Got My Lama Cock'd Man,
How'd I Get Beat By Sam?? I Won't Ride On Harle Like a Yamaha Fan ..
I'm a Crazy Bastard Niggahz Tried To Play Me After,
When i Went against a 'Abusive Male' N Failed To a Ladie Hazard...
I Wasn't here Fa Pain .. A lot of deep Writers But not even B Could BEAR MY PAIN,
It's Like i Roll With Crip Cubbs How'd i Give B Bear a Gain ??
You'd Think I'd Come Out Dissing Lawgix,
But my Ambition is On a Different Topic,
Tell Me 'yall about to collab Listen Stop It' ...
Only Real One Precise Is Me,
Reason Donnie looks like a crackhead Mommy Cyphing With me ..
I Roc Fa Day's He bitches n Babies Plus Stops To Play..
Word Is Blue RH!NO Dropped To Grey ..
YUP! Tom Got Me When i Wrote Beyond Sloppy
But The Pawn Copied a Former King's Moves To Dawn Gotti ..
Sequence's Wack, That Was a One Time Deal Like Keep It That Way,
And Just Dump That Feel ..
After Quence It Was Ghost For The Second Time,
Theres No Third Haunting As My Weapon Shines ..
The City That Never Sleeps i'll Never Rest The raw
Flex Ya Jaw .. i Brought a Few Extra Saws ..
They Culd Say Rhino Got Um But Thys Lion Never Left The Straw
ThaOne's My Niggah So Figgah He Won a Round ..
Told Homie Swerve The Circus N Don't Become a Clown ..
I'm The Nasty fetus Coming Out of Abortion ..
C - 4 Ain't Really Kill Um That Got Blown Out Of Proportion
Most These Guy's Said I Was Lyrically Suppose To Die ..
Loss To a Nightmare Like i Can't Figure Out What Happene'd When i Closed My Eyes
Arv Jabbed Me a Few Time's,
He Won The Match Now We Like Ali N Frazier Throwing Up The Same Crew Sign
Once i Met Meta i Knew i Was Destined Fa Greatness,
They Say Every Loss Is a Lesson So Take It, Now Let Um Try Testing The Sacred ..
Dear -.HaZarD.- they still Ain't Resting The Hatred ..
I Feel Like This Whole Time Was Like Try Me Week ..
So Yeaaah Got Knock'd Down But My I-V's Speak ..
Everything you Trannys Leak Is Dinner Talk With The Family Brief
,Whats a Loss By Orlando When I'm Presently Spitting Miami Heat ..
Uh- o Looks Like It's Arv Again, Dec 21st 2012 When Star'z Amend
We About To Eat Till Are Attempts feeding Starving Friends ..
Give Me Salvation Army I Rather Not Steal Sweaters..
Plex Got Um,Blind Hands Not Neccessarily a Second guess but it was just To Let um Feel Betta ..
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Re: The Battles Never Over .. ( Pt 1)

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All honesty man.. this shit was ILL. This was some SKILLZ 2009 Wrap-Up type joint with iller multies and metaphores.
"Who Am I Next To Prison? My Teeth R Fine Don't Test The Wisdom
Ghost Was Never Good Like You Stupid Fucks Need a Exorcism.."
"Alot Of Drama Got Canned I Still Got My Lama Cock'd Man,
How'd I Get Beat By Sam?? I Won't Ride On Harle Like a Yamaha Fan .."

I mean the name drops were crazy and how you weren't quite dissin' everyone just bringin' things into perspective on how your past battles were against them. I mean I actually read though this whole thing... and not quite sure why you're always so slept on.

ILL ASS Drop dude!
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Post by Quix »

Your the only guy on this site that has enough time on his hands to write long ass pieces of trashy useless crap ... daily!

p.s Hazzard was the weakest most overratted name you dropped in that piece ..lmfao!!


How'd I Get Beat By Sam?? I Won't Ride On Harle Like a Yamaha Fan

...and he ain't riding harleys cuz he's allready riding his boy David Suzuki
Real Recognize Real ... who dah Fuck is you???

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Post by complexity »

Took me about 10 minutes to read this beast.

I'd say this was near classic.

The only part that I didn't like was some of the quips, that were meant as humor, came off as out of place.

Everything else was real interesting. The flow was sick, and the rhymes were strong most of the time.

My favorite lines were probably the Ghost one, The Rell One, the harle one, Domino, and Lawgix.
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Re: The Battles Never Over .. ( Pt 1)

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ThaOneYouHate wrote:
And As Far As For Riggz.. There's A Difference Between Gettin Slept On And Bein Hated Lol... Hazard Has Sparked A Lot Of Animosity in His Time Here And There's Lotta People On Tha Forum That Aint Willing To Let That Go.. So it May Look As if He's Slept On.. But Ayy..

... in other words, Shit was before my time LOL! Gotcha man.
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Re: The Battles Never Over .. ( Pt 1)

Post by Lawgix »

Riggz wrote:
ThaOneYouHate wrote:
And As Far As For Riggz.. There's A Difference Between Gettin Slept On And Bein Hated Lol... Hazard Has Sparked A Lot Of Animosity in His Time Here And There's Lotta People On Tha Forum That Aint Willing To Let That Go.. So it May Look As if He's Slept On.. But Ayy..

... in other words, Shit was before my time LOL! Gotcha man.
waayyyyy before Riggz came along haha.... i still remember half the shit Haz got himself into...
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Re: The Battles Never Over .. ( Pt 1)

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all i can say is classic..

shit was super dope fam.. i got you..

We're about to bring hell on this site..
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