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The Quix Identity - Part 2

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The Quix Identity - part 2




sooo, the day i got out attempted to get back to mah roots
retired the back pack and dah boots, cash and dah loot
black mask and the ruge, as well as the crack i produced!
scrapped most mah dudes, magnifiyed mah True dogz
avoiding all the beefz, and the petty fuckin hoop-La
the move was, tah reaarange the future by way of the present
hoping tah get legit money, and not by way of the wesson
why stay wid aggresion and obsessions tah run dah block?
make 10 times as much educated purchsing a hundred stocks
flurishing without the gun or rock, wid hope to have moms proud
got a real job, moved of dah corner into a 5 room house
jump on the computer and look into going back tah school
dropped out of grade 12, just as well was the classic fool
class clown, school pot head ... the local drug dealer type
didn't push a coup only peddled dat two wheeler bike
rolled up tah class, the crop of pussy was a blessin
was dah only nigguh wid the home room class in detenition
trashed my acceptence, and gave me an altimatim
i said fuck you ...................
they took mah enrollment and had it withdawled for blazing
i was appauled and shaking, waiting for the sweat tah stop
how am i gonna get by ... and thought to myself god bless the rock
may be looked down upon, but i'm sure they'll respect the glock
the death list, yeah i checked some off ... i was back in dah street
black mask wid dah heat, cash stacked from the weed
was soo close but the lord left mah future Discarded
no hope in hell, smoking weed ALL DAY and feeling retarded
sorry for mah self was so close to mah goals but i merely departed
Suicidel now that mah black ass is right back where it started

-- Tue Feb 02, 2010 3:54 am --

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Re: The Quix Identity - Part 2

Post by Riggz »

I hope this ends happily Quix...
"was dah only nigguh wid the home room class in detenition
trashed my acceptence, and gave me an altimatim
i said fuck you ...................
they took mah enrollment and had it withdawled for blazing
i was appauled and shaking, waiting for the sweat tah stop
how am i gonna get by ... and thought to myself god bless the rock"

...so far, you going doing the same path you started in Part I.. you ain't learned yet?
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i dropped out in 12th grade too homie. i was feelin this shit man. its illy send me a link to part one so i can grasp the whole concept
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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NIce... i dug that, good flow to it and your content was on point. Props.
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Re: The Quix Identity - Part 2

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once again my man quix puttin it down.. i like these stories of your life man, subject, content, and appeal was alll there its dope. and at the same time kind of uplifting and shit.. i like it man. quix always on point

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WERD .. thanks for all the feed fellaz!!
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Re: The Quix Identity - Part 2

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I dunno if this is actually your identity or not, seems a little intense, regardless of whether it is or not it's got that edgy feel to it and definitely holds a sense of reality.

"how am i gonna get by ... and thought to myself god bless the rock
may be looked down upon, but i'm sure they'll respect the glock
the death list, yeah i checked some off ... i was back in dah street
black mask wid dah heat, cash stacked from the weed"
^I like that stretch the best right there. flowin' unique and such. Nice drop playa. 1
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