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Are You Listenin' Yet?

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We recognize the works of humanity thru each word
thru each verse each syllable and of course thru each verb
thru each action we ever experienced you experience too
you hearin' it thru all of these appearances we do...
but me I'm more silent possibly vocal with wisdom and such
so I speak my mind depictin' life and the description of trust
upliftin' the cuffs that connect the wrist and fold your palms
hold the calm when you least expect it you got frozen arms
so unharmed but still you don't recognize it till we explain it
till we arrange it with each spoken sentence that we sayin' quick
say it slick 4 tire tracks wreckin' amongst the lives of those lost
those tossed by their joyous love of problems undisclosed thoughts
I suppose God can tell you how to live but can't live your life
if I'm right then in time you'll get the picture. . . am I right?
We the poetic hums amongst the lost ones of projectile words
aimed at nerves aimed at him and hers until they believe our work
imagine me accomplish nothin' sittin' here and readin' what I said is enough
if I ain't gettin' the love then I guess I just never invisioned enough
I guess my thoughts isn't that plush till you understand good riddance it's love...
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Re: Are You Listenin' Yet?

Post by Riggz »

I'm not into all that sweet humdrum, woa is me joints.. but this was pretty solid. If you really want this to shine, get aberrant with it. Switch it up.

"if I ain't gettin' the love then I guess I just never invisioned enough" - you get the picture.

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