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ExSpeaRmiNtaTioN!

Post by Vaughn »

from above the sky box comes aquatic rhyming drops
soaking global, sick flows are BOLDER than giant rocks
Gibraltar's a pebble in my view, voice is base and treble on cue
fingers plus keys in legible groove, resulting in an incredible brew
where's the booze? let's drink, spit, fart, punch, kick round-a-house
throw Dick in JessiCa Alba'S-mouth, party, smokE On caNcer~sticKs
dampened~ wit twat juice from exotic dancers~lips
likened to Lalia Ali's pussy, able 2 snap~a~dick../

*...pause... 8 bar puff break...*

Vaughn DeCidez & EnJoys when an ass~Beatings~deployeD
SwiFt PunChes at Lightnin-SpEed like a CheetaH~on~RoidS
Be ParaNoid! LyRicallY Sid VIciouS when BitchEs bring NoIse 2Me!
The BeeF is SiR~LoineD cuz my SWollEn MemBer Is RoYaltY!
I aM tHe FirE N AlaRms! RighT Now BaKEd off HyDro N tha BoNg
SuPer SlicK with PeNs <iNsidE my Palm> when i'M wRiTinG My WroNgS
anD like GirlZ juMpin RoPe You'll AlwaYS catch me TwiRlin a DuTCh
I FeLL Hard, BroKe mY anKle, can'T waLk now THe WorLd is my cRutCh
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Re: ExSpeaRmiNtaTioN!

Post by eMCee Havic »

this was dope i thought, no real subject but dope.. welcome to the site you should be an asset.

Vaughn DeCidez & EnJoys when an ass~Beatings~deployeD
SwiFt PunChes at Lightnin-SpEed like a CheetaH~on~RoidS
Be ParaNoid! LyRicallY Sid VIciouS when BitchEs bring NoIse 2Me!
The BeeF is SiR~LoineD cuz my SWollEn MemBer Is RoYaltY!

liked that part the most
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Post by QwarterZ »

The first part was dope, the 2nd part was doper
I'm diggin the style
really don't like the MoHmnM type of writing
but it's whatever doesn't take away from the skills
but it is a eyesore


keep doing you!

Gibraltar's a pebble in my view, voice is base and treble on cue
fingers plus keys in legible groove, resulting in an incredible brew

that was dope....keep writing!
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

where you from kid?

this shit was ill tho i liked it alot. smooth flow good concepts overall very nice

ill be lookin for more drops from you man
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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