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my dissertation

Post by eMCee Havic »

allright folks once again its the M.D
rippin the script and flippin the shit

check it

my childhood was rugged i struggled in school
didn't learn much anyway guess i fumbled the tools
i rumbled wit dudes constantly til i was expelled
grew up hard headed went from detention to jailed
classes i failed didnt mean anything but an F
started smokin sess at 10 so i said fuck all the rest
drinkin on weekends was the only thing i enjoyed
hated all my teachers so curse words were deployed
spent half my youth in correctional centers for kids
an angry blonde haired bastard whose temper was shit
i graduated school a fool from demenor to felonies
i wasnt sellin keys but i got caught 4 sellin weed
at 18 i went to jail on and off from then to now
moved to selling thizz and gave up on freinds and crowds
see money defeated my inner pesonality ultimately
got caught and hit a cop while runnin the souless meadly
faced 5 to ten on a minimum an they tried to roll me
said this would go away but they really didnt know me
hired a lawyer blew my ernings on one court case
got timed served plus 4 years probation 144 days
spent 4 birthdays encaged inside this fuckin system
dubbed my self Modern Defiance cause i'll alway resist em
never assist em cause yeah, my life is pretty fucked
but i make my own bed at night facin my own muck
and if you think you harder or had a harder life
i ask then how you alive cause i've amost done it twice


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this was aight....I seen better from you
then again I think I can't get into the whole lifestyle thing?

otherwise it's still up there lyrically so I can't front on it....ahhhhh it's dope! LoL
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Post by Riggz »

seee, my life was too damn boring to write about.
Mom birthed me
Dad disiplined
finished highschool
Military
College
Gotta job
Married
Kids
Living happily ever after while being a net/emcee.

Not much going on there.. but anywayz.. Defi, I like your post where you think about your flow and syllables rather than your topic. This was an ok read... snored through some parts, shook my head on others.

Least you had something to write about.

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