When Lapping Fine ..

[Haz]

I Factually Claim Tragedies Gain
In General Terms Go Up On a Casualties Crane
Tricks Can't Get Me when The Big Pic's Magically Framed
Theres No Manual To Me This Shit Automatically Came ..
No Love, Youngin's Got Me Feeling Blasphemies Sane ..
No one'll Look Into Shit The Outlook Practically Changed ..
I Ain't see Much Progress After 'Changes' is it Actually Same??
Excuse My Grammer i Can Put Pieces Together Better Whenever
i Don't Use a Hammer, Posta Kid Homie Just View The Banner..
Critics Is Hard To Please Sooo I Never Conclude To Manners
I Ball My Fist Around Their Roots Like a Ruthless Planter..
My Sickness is Like Patients Viewing 2pac..More Juice Fa Cancer
I Never Grip a Noose For Chanters, Why Leave Um Hangin,Bangin
No Protection So What They Go Nuts! N Never Refuse The Answer
Who'll Move The Panther? i Wouldn't Chase a Cat, Banks Stats
Map Where My Chase Is At, If I Lose Something i Make it Baaack,
Get Earthed Automatic Rebirth Fuck That Atheist Crap ..
My Desperation Turned Into Ambition i'll Share You Slow ..
I'm Known To Link Up With Struggle Bumping "Numb" Never "Where'd You Go"...
It's The Masta Mind, Passed A Prime Like U Painting The Whip?
i'm Gassing Mine, Passive Grind Mixed With a Hazard Sign
Rappings Fine, Status Cline Makes These Bastards Wine ! ..
Spitting The Up Most Sparks The Soldier With Most Heart,
Holding 2 Products i'm The One to Check out ina Massive Line
Attach Ya Rhymes With a Map Of Finds, Ambition is Your Point,
True Nater Debator Feeeel The Mission In ya Joints ..
Class It's Time, To Conclude Theres No Class Fa Mimes
Silent Killer On Track Watch Ya Bac When Lapping Fine..

[Riggz]

You had some good lines in there - "I Ball My Fist Around Their Roots Like a Ruthless Planter..
My Sickness is Like Patients Viewing 2pac..More Juice Fa Cancer"

And the opening was put together tightly, however i'm not sure you stayed on topic. Seemed to jump around.. as a matter of fact, I'm not even sure what the subject of this is.. but I will say you had some nice multies as usual.

I'm pretty grounded literature wise, but I couldn't feel what you were trying to make me feel. Sum it up in a few words, because I'd like to catch the meaning behind this.

[Haz]

My encore Version basically. Thanks Fam