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Haz
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Through Out the Night.

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He Said Life Was a Maze
He Ain't Record Every Sight On a Page
Left Common Sense Alone Till Going Right Seemed a Waste
My Minds Screaming With Demons Caged My Dreams Awaits
In a Stream Of Plagues, Got Something Curable i Ain't
Needing Aids .. My Future Dreams Are Seen Afraid
With Time The Pain Grows Like a Clean Ta Braids..
I Came In With The Means Ta Save,Make The Same Noise
A Nina Made..Chose Not To Mac Like Maq, Robina Brave..
Go Back Like Jack Moon Walking As Screama's Wave ..
I Fiend Ta Pave .. Success For Others..
Can't Help Myself i'll Rest For Brothers..
a Loss Is a Loss, I'm Lost At The Cost Of My Coughs
Map Gone I Lost It I'm Off, in My Minds Jungle Shits Often a Toss
Like Selling Dead Animals i'm Flipping Coffins Of Sloths
Unleash The Beast That Died, The Beast Inside ..
That'll Never Come Ta Peace With Pride ..
Fell Off With Everything I'm Beneath The Ride..
Others Rolla Coast I Grip a Bowl Ta Smoke N put Everything Deep Aside
it Never Go's A Way So I'ma Hold My Prays
N Continue To Live For 2Morow Like Theres No Today ..
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Re: Through Out the Night.

Post by Riggz »

Tight Amb, Tight. I liked this one a lot.
"In a Stream Of Plagues, Got Something Curable i Ain't
Needing Aids .. My Future Dreams Are Seen Afraid
With Time The Pain Grows Like a Clean Ta Braids..
I Came In With The Means Ta Save,Make The Same Noise
A Nina Made..Chose Not To Mac Like Maq, Robina Brave.." -- tight bars there.

Nothing to pick on here. I liked....
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Re: Through Out the Night.

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In a Stream Of Plagues, Got Something Curable i Ain't
Needing Aids .. My Future Dreams Are Seen Afraid
With Time The Pain Grows Like a Clean Ta Braids..
^^^^^^^that was dope
I felt the working of this, the imagery
the thought process, the multi's, the overall concept
really thought provoking and deep, keep writing!
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Re: Through Out the Night.

Post by -TraMaTiK- »

u shudda wrote more,thats my only complaint. i member u used to write 2page verses lol good job,the flow was nice. just wish there was more,and maybe a lil more descriptive but yo its hot. keep droppin an peep my track 'take it all' in the C-C if u cud sometime
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